A place I Liked ...short story
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A place I Liked ...short story
by Thewolf Fri Jan 15, 2010 11:45 pm
A Place I liked
I was ten years old when i got a chance to visit the most beautiful city in Europe. Which is Krakow; it’s situate in Poland, 450 Km south The capital Warsaw. I still can remember my first sight there, I thought myself seeing colors for the first time. The place where I came from there were only few colors, yellow, red and blue sky with black smoke, but in Krakow, if I flew on a missile , I’d say that I was on another planet. In the way from Warsaw airport to Krakow, I took a place near the bus window, i enjoyed seeing the magical nature: green mountains and many rivers crossing them. Most of people there are farmers. I saw women pulling cows and men driving tractors, but the rains disturbed me, because I had to dry the window glass from time to time , I didn’t want even to have a wink or lose small action. But the special moment started on the fourth day from the trip. When they took us to Wawel castle. It is an old building, it made me feel that I was acting in Robin hood story. The high walls and big iron gate were amazing, also I saw old cavalries clothes and swords. After that we went to have a general look from a high tower from the castle, we saw Wisla river passing near Wawel and crossing all Poland.
When the trip ended and we were going back to Algeria, the plaine landed and I woke up from my sweet dream. Wrote by ; Yacine.d
2009
I was ten years old when i got a chance to visit the most beautiful city in Europe. Which is Krakow; it’s situate in Poland, 450 Km south The capital Warsaw. I still can remember my first sight there, I thought myself seeing colors for the first time. The place where I came from there were only few colors, yellow, red and blue sky with black smoke, but in Krakow, if I flew on a missile , I’d say that I was on another planet. In the way from Warsaw airport to Krakow, I took a place near the bus window, i enjoyed seeing the magical nature: green mountains and many rivers crossing them. Most of people there are farmers. I saw women pulling cows and men driving tractors, but the rains disturbed me, because I had to dry the window glass from time to time , I didn’t want even to have a wink or lose small action. But the special moment started on the fourth day from the trip. When they took us to Wawel castle. It is an old building, it made me feel that I was acting in Robin hood story. The high walls and big iron gate were amazing, also I saw old cavalries clothes and swords. After that we went to have a general look from a high tower from the castle, we saw Wisla river passing near Wawel and crossing all Poland.
When the trip ended and we were going back to Algeria, the plaine landed and I woke up from my sweet dream. Wrote by ; Yacine.d
2009
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Re: A place I Liked ...short story
by TM2010 Tue Mar 23, 2010 4:21 pm
Thewolf,Thanks for this work ,this is very nice short story , I like the way you discribe things,you have used colors and places discribe,my best regards toward you thewolf. 
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Re: A place I Liked ...short story
by mimi cici Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:27 pm
wonderful story,and a wonderful way of writing.I really enjoy it Wolf. So Nice. 
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