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A humble Algerian!

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A humble Algerian!

Post by w_ch on Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:08 pm

A humble Algerian


A message to all, if you wouldn't mind:
I'm a man and here's why I came,
Careless to the dangers I may find,
Backed up by faith; courage is my middle name.
I'm firm,wise and also kind
And helping others is my eternal aim,
Based on a treaty that I volunteerly signed,
Bywhich I seek neither thanks,nor fame.
I stand up to shrewds, no matter if lined,
Knowledge in hands,aiming them the tame.
Easterners or westerners;I don't care if combined
Since I've never been beaten in a battle or in a game.
You'd say I'm exaggerating:"you've something to hide".
You'd say "it's nonesense, pretty lame,
And between reality and fancy, you've joined"
I permit you to speak,since for me, it's all the same.
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by Nounette on Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:41 pm

Wow !! Nice One W_Ch !! I Liked What You've Written !! You're Always Special !!
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by NANA on Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:57 pm

ya3omri1 I love it W_ch it's amazing, you're a real poet ya3omri1

Carry on!
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by Thewolf on Sun Mar 07, 2010 6:54 pm

nice words w-ch ...i'll write them in my copybook
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by w_ch on Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:04 pm

Thank you for your comments
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by wimened on Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:07 pm

Beautiful poem w_ch.
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by bryne_kh2000 on Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:48 pm

What a nice poem..............GREAT ONE...........I like it. Your messege is being taken into consideration dude. Looking forward to read your next poems.
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by Guest on Sat Apr 24, 2010 6:09 pm

Very nice one W-ch, lucky we are to have such poets.......carry on.

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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by beowulf on Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:43 pm

good work friend " w_ch"

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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by Mary on Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:17 pm

Great W-ch!!
Amazing Wallah Smile I loved the last line
Cool

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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by Toufikzad on Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:24 pm

Hey all...hey w_ch ...
I'm going to say what i noticed...i'm going to ask u things i didn't understand in what u've already written ..i hope to read ur reply ...
well...i know that u know about ur style..u know that what u wrote is nice..but the idea is the man that u show his personality in the lines above...i mean ...u discribe the perfect man ...the Algerian man ...but ...the question is in the title...why u may choose such title??
I mean ...OK...u discribe something and u give its name to the title...but in this way?? ...I find that ...i don't know how to express this idea..
look w_ch ...imagine that the reader of ur poem doesn't know that u r Algerian ...ok...he read the title...than he start reading lines...
then, what's the idea about?? is it irony?? is it the real personality of Algerian ?? what the idea exactly...??
I hope u get me dear brother ...
read u soon
thanx alot
pliz accept my respect
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by w_ch on Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:37 pm

Hello Toufikzad,

First, I want to thank you for your constructive criticism. It is acually like you thought it. The title is ironic ( or that's what I meant it to be). Sorry to tell you this, but I was criticising some of the algerians. They are not as I described them. They are the other way round. And look to the irony; all what I've said would be considered modesty. Therefore, there are other things hidden which this "humble" Algerian doesn't want to show. I really meant it no harm; I just wanted to show that there are some who rely on their "talking" rather than on their "doing". Hence ,this poem (I don't know if it's a real poem) is addressed to those who "blow" themselves out of nothing. They act as if they own the place, yet they are no more than " wind in webs". Sorry for that mates, that's just the way I see things.

On the other hand, every literary work can be diversly interpreted. It means, there are many interpretations which usually contradict with each other. I'm not saying this is a literary work, but you might apply this idea on it. You can analyse it the way you see it appropriate. Thank you, and read you soon! And really sorry for these harsh words!
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by Ismailos2 on Sun May 02, 2010 10:17 pm

That is so great ! Amazing words ! You're quite the poet man Very Happy xx Keep posting any amazing thing you write man :Dxx Keep it up Wch Very Happy
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by bilinda on Sun May 02, 2010 10:20 pm

Smart one w-ch .I got you
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by Alonso on Thu May 06, 2010 5:43 pm

a very nice piece dude .
carry on ... actually i wanna something funny from you ... come on i am waiting it..
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by louli on Sun Jun 27, 2010 11:27 pm

very simple beautiful words.

your adopted style cross minds and heart

thank you W_CH!

keep in.
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Re: A humble Algerian!

Post by Hannane EF on Mon Dec 13, 2010 10:47 pm

May you tell me why did you choose this title?

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