Soledad (Group discussion)

Hi mates In this post, we'll discuss the story of Soledad. As the story goes, your remarks and questions are most welcome !

At first,I've to say wooooow..I love your style.Then,i'm gonna see later if there is something missing...!

Bless you sweety ! You words really moved me !

Oh my God!!! it's amazing sister. I really love it and appreciate reading it very much you have a superb style. Bless you darling. I'm really proud of you and I can't wait to read what will happen to Soledad and her cousin
Micipsa. At the beginning, I found this name strange but now I'm sure that there is deep meaning behind using this name Concerning Soledad's father, I felt that he's a harsh man while his daughter is a sensitive and kind girl. I can't escape the point that I had the impression of a lack of communication between the father and his daughter. Perhaps this feeling will disappear when reading the coming episodes of the story I'm waiting for the next episode of Sassy's Soledad

Oh my sweet Sabine ! I'm so glad that you loved it ! Micipsa?! Never heard of it? Lol I have a cousin named Micipsa Hehehe let us not do a biographical criticism though His name in fact has a lot to do with his fate and future.
I just loved your analysis! You love literature and I knew you would adopt a sharp critical eye when reading it.

As for the characters of Soledad and her father 'the Bacha', they are very complex and their relation is ...let's say an original one. We'll see all this together this Saturday
Keep reading darling Much love

I just had a quick glimpse at the story, i loved the way it strated and weaved its events, I promise i will try to read it later again and come with an analysis
About the style, you are really talented Sassy, im looking forward to read more

You're too kind my dear friend Can't wait to read you darling!

woow,I like the second part Sassy...too curious to read more

I'm SO happy you liked it and you're reading it sister Thank you !

Hi sassy! wow wooow you're doing an amazing job sister. hats off I love this part too much and I cannot wait to read the next one. There is suspense in your story you're always pushing us to ask questions about your story's characters, their behaviors and what will happen in next part????
Now I'm quite sure that Bacha is a harsh man. I propose to adopt a feminist reading for your nice story. The story's events push us to think of patriarchy here, the father, bacha, is the dominant character. he's portrayed as a rational, strong, and decisive man. Power is attributed to him. whereas solé seems to be emotional, weak, and submissive. She is described as "a heartless hypocrite who would do anything to please her father." her feelings and opinions are neglected. it's her father who decide in her place. I cannot wait to read more so that I can decide who's the ego character, the superego and the id

OH MY GOD ! You really make me smile when I read you !! You are just thinking the way I used to approach literature last year (psycho-feminism ) (you have obviously read a good deal about Freud and Beauvoir girl ! )
I love the way you pay attention to the words used in the text. (You're a fine critic my dear).

You have said about Solé :"her feelings and opinions are neglected". Don't you think she is the one who is deliberately neglecting them? How about her ability to 'digest bitterness'? Isn't she trying to adapt herself to her environment? What do you think?

Thank you my friend for your kind words which cheers one up I'll think of your questions and try to be more pertinent and careful in my analysis
Waiting for the next part

i like it, and eager to read more

Wow , I'm so glad you loved it! It really cheers me up

Bravo Sassy I'd just finished reading the 3rd part of your wonderfull story. I really love it (I cannot give my analysis right now cuz batteries are very low lol) saha ramdanak sister

p.s I really miss you my adorable friend

I missed you doll Saha Ramdanek

I'm so so so so happy you're loving it (I can't write either I used to write at night but in Ramadan I really can't stay up late )
Saha ftourak

Wow Sassy, really Woooooooooow.What is all that? I am really fond of Literature and here we are . A very good style, Hats off Dear, carry on.

Ohhh thank you so much dear, I'm so happy you liked it May God bless that kind heart of yours

Congratulations Sassy! a very good job indeed!
I admire the wide range of vocabulary, and enjoy your way of unfolding basic details of the story. what's called "in media res", starting from the middle, makes us readers quite curious an impatient. But honestly, i personally prefer a lighter and happier tone that that of solitude and loneliness and sorrow. But it's too early to talk about that, let's wait and see

Go on Sassy, keep surprising us!

As I told you before some touching scenes attracted me when the child stood up to whisper something in Soledad's ear I realized the scene like I am watching it directly and this is due to your fully described scenes. I imagined Soledad with a narrow eyes smiling like a Chinese girl haha! I like the integration of French words this apply a beauty through the story.
Reading the last paragraph make me wonder about the memorable days she passed through! You can find a way and add that memorable days I don’t just make it coz it will add a good aspect on Soldad’s sight
The use of detailed description like how the Novella should be and you did well focusing on this element. The story seems well formed and free mistaken. Now I’m eager to read the rest I know that you’re dealing with the teaching stuffs but just know that there are some loyal readers who’re going to follow the events even if it’s more than 500 pages. You know why because this is the notion of reading me personally when I read 5 pages of any book I find myself obligated to read it wholly you know what. I mean and I think the majority of book lovers agree with me.
May Allah guide you through the right path and life would be easy for you all brothers and sisters.

@ Aspire: Oh you've read it Aspire?! Wow I was going to ask you to do!
I'm so glad you loved it!!!!! (ça me touche vraiment!!)

As to the lonely atmosphere, I REALLY REALLY liked you mentioning it

Soledad in Spanish means solitude.

But let's keep some suspense

@Karim Your remarks are always sooooo valuable for me!
And I'm just like you, so nuts about reading LOL
If I start reading a book, I have to finish it the same day! Too curious

You know guys, the story is all there in my head but I just can't write too much. It's a real story, and I'm hesitating concerning the details (I keep modifying names, places, people but I don't want to change the events. Though some events seem important for me but I don't want to be misunderstood, it's complicated. It's all mixed up in my mind).

don't mind about names they're just names but the most important is the plot and the events...............later i'm going to read the rest and reply soon inchallah

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw en fin soledad de retour ; ) I'll read it as soon as possible and give you my comments as usual I adooooooore literature and reading your nice story just cheers me up (you're doing a GREAT job sister) hats off

Oh thanks a lot my doll I'm really happy you love it! I wrote a part yesterday night, I may post an episode tomorrow God willing! I just hope you'll all keep following and loving it my friends

Hi
again another words of our great story teller. Talking about the habits and
dealing with the blood-headed. To love the story you better love all the
characters coz they’re put for a special reason. Strict and hard ruling fathers
sometimes are so wanted especially talking about these generation but I don’t
think this so for Soldad coz she seems so matured and the thing that I adore
about her character is she got rid of troubles with whoever using her unique
tactics.

Miscipsa
is somehow depicting my childhood coz I used
to be fascinated and eager to play with small coloured stuffs as you said me
too I was curious to play with small pieces like I don’t know I just remember
that touching stuffs like small glass balls really it’s weird and till now I remember
that I liked that so much you know what I mean like to watch at them all the
time even they are not at that type of mysteriousness or magical thing lol

Hey for the first time I’m telling
this dream to people, when I was 6 years old I had a dream a very magical one
believe me I saw myself in a very well decorated house made of glass a
colourful glass like pink and blue green and yellow …etc oh goodness I still
feel strange remembering this dream like I want to cry coz I missed it or just
I wished if stayed living in that house till now I remember that house tables
made of glasses and there was a few rooms when I got upstairs I found a very
gorgeous rooms I mean bed rooms and of course I got in one of them a bed and
games a TV and a library stock in the wall and it’s doors were made of a
transparent glass there was a window in it when I took a look from it I found that
there was a national route next to that house and a very huge field a very huge
field and some trees. Believe me this dream was 18 years ago how I can describe
it so amazing that house so amazing that place and so amazing I was feeling in
that dream…till now when I am searching for an explanation reading some dream
interpretations but got no real ones, this is not created due to my wild
imagination I must confess my imagination is so deep you can’t imagine but
still looking for a clue to that dream…wow wow wooooooooooow what I’m doing I
got out of the right path I got out of discussion so sorry but I had to spell
this dream out.


Hey congratulation you’re on the right
way inspirational writer…I realized why you are not writing quickly because you
need time to think coz this kind of writing doesn’t come artificially most of
them come directly I mean something like Inspiration and you find yourself writing
and writing like fantastic and this happens to me nearly during all my rap
poems and thoughts and these latter would be list as the best as always but the
one that I force my self to create and think about them would be less
attractive for me. I feel like I’m not relaxed with them.

I hope you got my message from this
long bla bla bla hahahaha so take your time writing story. Hold on hold on hold
on, and who is Farid?