~~DEATH~

Really a nice poem! wow!
The technique of the acrostich seems to decorate beautifuly the stanzas of the poem.
The architecture of this genuine piece reveals your creativity and commitment to art.
I am not a critic of art, rather someone who appreciate the beauty of words that your poem supplies.
May I ask you about your source of inspiration; I mean poets that influence your imagination.
I recall Emile dickenson, T.S.Eliot, and Y.B. Yeats...among those who wrote on DEATH.
Do you intend to write universally, or just a flow of ideas and ephemiral thought?
All in all, it's an amazing piece of writing, hopefully its yours.
Regards, Bacha

Dear Bacha ;
I am truelly flattered about your words .
This may sound strange , but I am influenced by none of the names you've mentioned above, not that I think all of them are great artists , and brilliant in what they do.
I know very little about poetry though.
I simply like to RHYME :p
It all started after my acquaintance of a dear friend of mine. He is insanely fond of rhyming , and everything he says , he say it with a rhyme , and I have to say that made him a really obnixious and loathsome person to be around, but some how he dragged me into his little twisted game , and I turned to be not bad myself
I wrote this piece few months ago , after I was thumped by the death of three of my beloved relatives in a sorrowful unfortunate accident. (may their soul rest in peace)

I was grieved to the soul. I felt like a huge elephant is sitting on my chest , and I had to toss up emotions somehow. I was in bed already and too lazy to get up and fetch a pen and paper, so I wrote this poem on my mobile phone, and felt a great relief after that.
Much love and regards.

Please my sister accept my congratulations. I do swear that i felt that i'm reading to a famous poet. It is really nice. Keep posting please. i think i like to rhyme too.
PS: I am sorry about the death of your relatives. May heaven be their eternal home.

oooh my dear , I endlessly appreciate your genuine complement.
U know this is the firt time I ever share my writings.
The few people who have seen the things I write have been pushing me to show them to people , but for some reasons , I kept them for myself.

lately my i was really sad when my hard disk was damaged and I lost all my data : teaching materials (am a teacher) , writings , poems , and my diaries that i have been wrting since 3 years.
I am gonna share what's left or what I was able to recover.
Again , thank you for liking my poem.

Hugs.