the end of love and vanity
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the end of love and vanity
once upon a time there was an island , where all the feelings lived together
one day there was a storm in the sea and the island was about to get drowned
every feeling was scared but love made a boat to escape
every feeling boarded the boat . only 1 feeling was left
love got down to see who it was
it was EGO
love tried and tried
but ego wasn't moving also the water was rising
every one asked love to leave him and come in the boat
but love was made to love
at last all the feelings escape and LOVE dies with EGO on the island
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one day there was a storm in the sea and the island was about to get drowned
every feeling was scared but love made a boat to escape
every feeling boarded the boat . only 1 feeling was left
love got down to see who it was
it was EGO
love tried and tried
but ego wasn't moving also the water was rising
every one asked love to leave him and come in the boat
but love was made to love
at last all the feelings escape and LOVE dies with EGO on the island
MOD: Topic moved from Words...words...words to Literature... the other world
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Manel Bella- Number of posts : 7
Age : 28
Registration date : 2010-06-17
Re: the end of love and vanity
great happy to hear that
bilinda- Number of posts : 250
Age : 35
Location : neverland
Registration date : 2009-11-03
Re: the end of love and vanity
WOW...
Wonderful Manel
Amazing Wallah... It seems like ur writings are great just like ur sist
Wonderful Manel
Amazing Wallah... It seems like ur writings are great just like ur sist
MrL- Number of posts : 62
Age : 34
Registration date : 2010-05-21
Re: the end of love and vanity
Well well well ,great job my dear sister you did all this when I was out for just three hours I can't imagine what would you write if it was more than that.I'm proud of you, just carry on writing and remember that I'm backing.
wimened- Number of posts : 49
Age : 113
Location : Blida
Registration date : 2010-01-27
Re: the end of love and vanity
thank you Louli
thanks my dear mrl
and thank you my sister wimened
I very happy because you like it
thanks my dear mrl
and thank you my sister wimened
I very happy because you like it
Manel Bella- Number of posts : 7
Age : 28
Registration date : 2010-06-17
Re: the end of love and vanity
I'm sorry wolf I can not do that, because I do not believe in love
Manel Bella- Number of posts : 7
Age : 28
Registration date : 2010-06-17
Re: the end of love and vanity
Love is a fire will burn all of us...you believe or no!
Thewolf- Number of posts : 1050
Age : 424
Location : Desert
Registration date : 2010-01-12
Re: the end of love and vanity
I do not think so THE KOVE is not logical
Manel Bella- Number of posts : 7
Age : 28
Registration date : 2010-06-17
Re: the end of love and vanity
Very very nice Bella, keep writing..........I'm waiting more from you dear.
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Re: the end of love and vanity
LOVE SHUD DIE ! Right Manel ?!
The EGO killed Love this is the result.
Everyone shud understand that LOVE doesn't mean "SELFISHNESS", NEVER EVER.
I just think that.
Do u agree on that mates?
The EGO killed Love this is the result.
Everyone shud understand that LOVE doesn't mean "SELFISHNESS", NEVER EVER.
I just think that.
Do u agree on that mates?
Re: the end of love and vanity
thank you a lot angeleyes .
Well angeleyes will work your advice .
Well angeleyes will work your advice .
Manel Bella- Number of posts : 7
Age : 28
Registration date : 2010-06-17
Re: the end of love and vanity
...and then, Love wakes up again and become a Zombie and hunt all those who are "in love" and kills them by taking out their heart and burn it in fire.
Nice ending right?
Nice ending right?
Re: the end of love and vanity
I'm sorry were not messi I do not think that eventually, as you think because what is broken will not be repaired again
Manel Bella- Number of posts : 7
Age : 28
Registration date : 2010-06-17
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