After you left me ............
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Thewolf
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bryne_kh2000
NANA
Mary
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After you left me ............
I would like to introduce to you my first poem " After you left me" and i hope you like it.
Since that date i still remember
The broken day of December
Baby, you left me alone and pass away
And, i still miss the joy you painted on my face
everyday
We used to take hand by hand and walk under the
moonlight
Your eyes used to be bright in the darkest nights
Your smile used to revive my heart and make me forget
the cursed life
Your hight spirit used to bring me alive and tell me
“Hey! , don’t worry iam your beloved wife”
But now (to continued)................
Since that date i still remember
The broken day of December
Baby, you left me alone and pass away
And, i still miss the joy you painted on my face
everyday
We used to take hand by hand and walk under the
moonlight
Your eyes used to be bright in the darkest nights
Your smile used to revive my heart and make me forget
the cursed life
Your hight spirit used to bring me alive and tell me
“Hey! , don’t worry iam your beloved wife”
But now (to continued)................
Big brother- Number of posts : 129
Age : 39
Location : right here
Registration date : 2009-05-07
Re: After you left me ............
Nice One Big Brother !! I Waiting Since I Liked The Story !! Carry Ok Writing Brother !!
Re: After you left me ............
Wonderful Big Bro... I Really Loved it.......
Congratulations you're the Man !!!!
I'm looking forward reading the second part...
Good Luck
Congratulations you're the Man !!!!
I'm looking forward reading the second part...
Good Luck
Mary- Number of posts : 38
Age : 33
Registration date : 2009-10-29
Re: After you left me ............
wonderful Big brother! Carry on brother!
NANA- Number of posts : 143
Age : 34
Location : Secret Garden
Registration date : 2009-10-29
Re: After you left me ............
I did not know that you are so romantic big bro . nice start . i like your poem .
bryne_kh2000- Number of posts : 175
Age : 35
Location : NEVERLAND
Registration date : 2009-05-07
Re: After you left me ............
very nice big brother I'm eager to know the rest of your story
I wish it has a happy end.
I wish it has a happy end.
jamie- Number of posts : 57
Age : 35
Registration date : 2010-01-31
Re: After you left me ............
Nice words
Thewolf- Number of posts : 1050
Age : 424
Location : Desert
Registration date : 2010-01-12
Re: After you left me ............
i already gave u my opinion about it
nice words big bobo
nice words big bobo
cookie- Number of posts : 428
Age : 35
Location : real world
Registration date : 2010-03-21
Re: After you left me ............
hey BBB, I like it so much....carry on.
reminding you by the next part of it....
reminding you by the next part of it....
Guest- Guest
Re: After you left me ............
Looking to read the 2nd part big bro . Nice starting !
Londonhbb- Number of posts : 583
Age : 35
Registration date : 2009-05-15
Re: After you left me ............
I didn't know that we have such a good poet in here.
Nice job Big Brother . I expect more from you .
Nice job Big Brother . I expect more from you .
Biba- Number of posts : 108
Age : 32
Location : Hapiness Land
Registration date : 2010-04-12
Re: After you left me ............
oh brother so romantic but please don't stay a looong Age writing the 2nd part ok cos I'm waiting ok
tones of love- Number of posts : 19
Age : 37
Location : blida
Registration date : 2010-03-14
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