A humble Algerian!
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A humble Algerian!
A humble Algerian
A message to all, if you wouldn't mind:
I'm a man and here's why I came,
Careless to the dangers I may find,
Backed up by faith; courage is my middle name.
I'm firm,wise and also kind
And helping others is my eternal aim,
Based on a treaty that I volunteerly signed,
Bywhich I seek neither thanks,nor fame.
I stand up to shrewds, no matter if lined,
Knowledge in hands,aiming them the tame.
Easterners or westerners;I don't care if combined
Since I've never been beaten in a battle or in a game.
You'd say I'm exaggerating:"you've something to hide".
You'd say "it's nonesense, pretty lame,
And between reality and fancy, you've joined"
I permit you to speak,since for me, it's all the same.
A message to all, if you wouldn't mind:
I'm a man and here's why I came,
Careless to the dangers I may find,
Backed up by faith; courage is my middle name.
I'm firm,wise and also kind
And helping others is my eternal aim,
Based on a treaty that I volunteerly signed,
Bywhich I seek neither thanks,nor fame.
I stand up to shrewds, no matter if lined,
Knowledge in hands,aiming them the tame.
Easterners or westerners;I don't care if combined
Since I've never been beaten in a battle or in a game.
You'd say I'm exaggerating:"you've something to hide".
You'd say "it's nonesense, pretty lame,
And between reality and fancy, you've joined"
I permit you to speak,since for me, it's all the same.
Re: A humble Algerian!
Wow !! Nice One W_Ch !! I Liked What You've Written !! You're Always Special !!
Re: A humble Algerian!
I love it W_ch it's amazing, you're a real poet
Carry on!
Carry on!
NANA- Number of posts : 143
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Re: A humble Algerian!
nice words w-ch ...i'll write them in my copybook
Thewolf- Number of posts : 1050
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Re: A humble Algerian!
Beautiful poem w_ch.
wimened- Number of posts : 49
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Re: A humble Algerian!
What a nice poem..............GREAT ONE...........I like it. Your messege is being taken into consideration dude. Looking forward to read your next poems.
bryne_kh2000- Number of posts : 175
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Re: A humble Algerian!
good work friend " w_ch"
beowulf- Number of posts : 113
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Re: A humble Algerian!
Great W-ch!!
Amazing Wallah I loved the last line
Amazing Wallah I loved the last line
Mary- Number of posts : 38
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Hey all...hey w_ch ...
I'm going to say what i noticed...i'm going to ask u things i didn't understand in what u've already written ..i hope to read ur reply ...
well...i know that u know about ur style..u know that what u wrote is nice..but the idea is the man that u show his personality in the lines above...i mean ...u discribe the perfect man ...the Algerian man ...but ...the question is in the title...why u may choose such title??
I mean ...OK...u discribe something and u give its name to the title...but in this way?? ...I find that ...i don't know how to express this idea..
look w_ch ...imagine that the reader of ur poem doesn't know that u r Algerian ...ok...he read the title...than he start reading lines...
then, what's the idea about?? is it irony?? is it the real personality of Algerian ?? what the idea exactly...??
I hope u get me dear brother ...
read u soon
thanx alot
pliz accept my respect
I'm going to say what i noticed...i'm going to ask u things i didn't understand in what u've already written ..i hope to read ur reply ...
well...i know that u know about ur style..u know that what u wrote is nice..but the idea is the man that u show his personality in the lines above...i mean ...u discribe the perfect man ...the Algerian man ...but ...the question is in the title...why u may choose such title??
I mean ...OK...u discribe something and u give its name to the title...but in this way?? ...I find that ...i don't know how to express this idea..
look w_ch ...imagine that the reader of ur poem doesn't know that u r Algerian ...ok...he read the title...than he start reading lines...
then, what's the idea about?? is it irony?? is it the real personality of Algerian ?? what the idea exactly...??
I hope u get me dear brother ...
read u soon
thanx alot
pliz accept my respect
Re: A humble Algerian!
Hello Toufikzad,
First, I want to thank you for your constructive criticism. It is acually like you thought it. The title is ironic ( or that's what I meant it to be). Sorry to tell you this, but I was criticising some of the algerians. They are not as I described them. They are the other way round. And look to the irony; all what I've said would be considered modesty. Therefore, there are other things hidden which this "humble" Algerian doesn't want to show. I really meant it no harm; I just wanted to show that there are some who rely on their "talking" rather than on their "doing". Hence ,this poem (I don't know if it's a real poem) is addressed to those who "blow" themselves out of nothing. They act as if they own the place, yet they are no more than " wind in webs". Sorry for that mates, that's just the way I see things.
On the other hand, every literary work can be diversly interpreted. It means, there are many interpretations which usually contradict with each other. I'm not saying this is a literary work, but you might apply this idea on it. You can analyse it the way you see it appropriate. Thank you, and read you soon! And really sorry for these harsh words!
First, I want to thank you for your constructive criticism. It is acually like you thought it. The title is ironic ( or that's what I meant it to be). Sorry to tell you this, but I was criticising some of the algerians. They are not as I described them. They are the other way round. And look to the irony; all what I've said would be considered modesty. Therefore, there are other things hidden which this "humble" Algerian doesn't want to show. I really meant it no harm; I just wanted to show that there are some who rely on their "talking" rather than on their "doing". Hence ,this poem (I don't know if it's a real poem) is addressed to those who "blow" themselves out of nothing. They act as if they own the place, yet they are no more than " wind in webs". Sorry for that mates, that's just the way I see things.
On the other hand, every literary work can be diversly interpreted. It means, there are many interpretations which usually contradict with each other. I'm not saying this is a literary work, but you might apply this idea on it. You can analyse it the way you see it appropriate. Thank you, and read you soon! And really sorry for these harsh words!
Re: A humble Algerian!
That is so great ! Amazing words ! You're quite the poet man xx Keep posting any amazing thing you write man :Dxx Keep it up Wch
Ismailos2- Number of posts : 646
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Smart one w-ch .I got you
bilinda- Number of posts : 250
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Location : neverland
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Re: A humble Algerian!
a very nice piece dude .
carry on ... actually i wanna something funny from you ... come on i am waiting it..
carry on ... actually i wanna something funny from you ... come on i am waiting it..
Alonso- Number of posts : 57
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very simple beautiful words.
your adopted style cross minds and heart
thank you W_CH!
keep in.
your adopted style cross minds and heart
thank you W_CH!
keep in.
Re: A humble Algerian!
May you tell me why did you choose this title?
Hannane EF- Number of posts : 1
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