Home sweet home!
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w_ch
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Home sweet home!
Men in every coulor and race
Are indulged in an endless chase
Nothing but happiness they desire
With a determination and souls on fire
"Is there such a thing?",someone said.
"Only in dreams",another replied.
"You're in a place where morals are a myth,
men and women are drowning in filth;
You're in a place where the rich are kings
Wearing crowns and also rings
And the poor are mere slaves
Living in homes much better like caves
In a place where nothing works,
A perfect envirement for the growing sharks."
He took the answear with a trembling ear,
And turned blue in a constant fear.
He walked away with a sense of despair,
Sadness and grief had filled the air.
Untill he reached his work place,
And looked Directly at his employer's face:
"Would you give me my last paycheck,
I swear to run away & never come back..."
Are indulged in an endless chase
Nothing but happiness they desire
With a determination and souls on fire
"Is there such a thing?",someone said.
"Only in dreams",another replied.
"You're in a place where morals are a myth,
men and women are drowning in filth;
You're in a place where the rich are kings
Wearing crowns and also rings
And the poor are mere slaves
Living in homes much better like caves
In a place where nothing works,
A perfect envirement for the growing sharks."
He took the answear with a trembling ear,
And turned blue in a constant fear.
He walked away with a sense of despair,
Sadness and grief had filled the air.
Untill he reached his work place,
And looked Directly at his employer's face:
"Would you give me my last paycheck,
I swear to run away & never come back..."
Re: Home sweet home!
Hello, that's wonderful w_ch it's really amazing, may God bless you . keep on.
NANA- Number of posts : 143
Age : 34
Location : Secret Garden
Registration date : 2009-10-29
Re: Home sweet home!
hi .we have another poet here .to say the truth it is so nice .i liked it so much .so you are gifted also in poetry .keep going.i'am waiting another surprise from you
bilinda- Number of posts : 250
Age : 35
Location : neverland
Registration date : 2009-11-03
Re: Home sweet home!
Really it is a nice poem,but why this gloomy view to life? we do not have to sink under the heavy load of despair,look to the full part of the glass ,and be sure that life is fair.
Read you soon.
Read you soon.
chinda- Number of posts : 399
Age : 124
Location : Starland
Registration date : 2009-11-03
Re: Home sweet home!
Thank you for your comments ladies (I'll try to be more optimist next time )...It's a promise.
Re: Home sweet home!
Sorry For The Late Reply !! But It's Well Done W_Ch !! Thank You For This Poem !! I like It !!
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