Dreadful News
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Dreadful News
by imy Tue May 12, 2009 8:33 pm
Ascary voice is heard aloud
Coming britly from a lofty cloud
About an orphan boy
who was playing in joy
but gloomy news hit as thunder blew
That pushes him to the ultimat flaw
Where no sadness no grief is allowed
In a world,where only hatred is followed
He stends for a minute to recover
But his fortune is discovered
To live without friends is believable;
to live without parents is impossible.
Coming britly from a lofty cloud
About an orphan boy
who was playing in joy
but gloomy news hit as thunder blew
That pushes him to the ultimat flaw
Where no sadness no grief is allowed
In a world,where only hatred is followed
He stends for a minute to recover
But his fortune is discovered
To live without friends is believable;
to live without parents is impossible.
imy- Number of posts : 104
Age : 36
Registration date : 2009-05-07
Re: Dreadful News
by Hush Wed May 13, 2009 11:30 pm
It's not bad so I wish you'll carry on and be a great poet.
Read you soon
Read you soon
Hush- Number of posts : 529
Age : 39
Location : Dreaming land
Registration date : 2008-09-17
Re: Dreadful News
by faith forever!! Mon May 25, 2009 11:38 pm
oh I like your poem a lot...... and by the way the topic is interesting keep going and read you soon...bye
faith forever!!- Number of posts : 94
Age : 33
Location : building 9
Registration date : 2009-05-13
Re: Dreadful News
by Thewolf Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:36 pm
To live without friends is impossible too. Friendship is salt of life.
But where we should find those friends!
Come back to writing Imy, your words are really beautiful.
But where we should find those friends!
Come back to writing Imy, your words are really beautiful.
Thewolf- Number of posts : 1050
Age : 424
Location : Desert
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MaGGiE- Number of posts : 119
Age : 34
Location : in the heart of mum
Registration date : 2010-07-18
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