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Regrets

Post by Alonso on Thu May 20, 2010 6:49 pm



It is a wind of memories that scorches my soul
Leaving on my heart the trace of a blade
These visions of a past that I can not forget

On the one mistake that I could not forgive
The blaze of agony from inside me burning
Leave me stalled deep in my heart
I lost my light in the story, I only have the black
Could I get out one day, I still dare to believe
What I'm trying to fill empty but is never satisfied
I was filled with pain that can not be ignored
So I cry, I cry, but it did not finish
How to continue to live with any regrets.


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Re: Regrets

Post by bryne_kh2000 on Thu May 20, 2010 8:14 pm

Don't cry Alonso. You are surrounded by your brothers ... Ireally liked what you have written ..... Thank you
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Post by bilinda on Thu May 20, 2010 9:40 pm

hold hope always in your heart coz it is the candle that will enlighten you darkness.great job brother keep writing.
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Re: Regrets

Post by Alonso on Thu May 20, 2010 9:59 pm

thank u sista ..
here i am pessimistic but in my life i am optimistic...
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Post by chinda on Fri May 21, 2010 12:55 am

Don't regret about something passed Alonso... try to forget it and start again... Today is always a new day...Good work, carry on Alonso
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Re: Regrets

Post by Londonhbb on Fri May 21, 2010 1:31 am

Alonso it's really tough to stay thinking about the past . Try to leave the moment . By the way u have the skills of being a famous poet . Carry on bro !!
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Re: Regrets

Post by Alonso on Fri May 21, 2010 1:08 pm

thats what i am doing london hbb . but this poem i wrote it for my friend who still regret about all the things that he has done....
thank u chinda londonhbb for your comments..
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Re: Regrets

Post by Toufikzad on Sat May 22, 2010 12:43 am

Hello Alonso
let me start with the negative points...
1/it is short one
2/it is about darkness with no hope or happy end..
the possitive points....
u have already chosen a great title...
u make the link with ideas in very high way...
u talked about something touch the feelings before the mind...

thanx alot for all what u write ...try to write more and make it taller pliz

accept my best regards....read u soon
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Re: Regrets

Post by Alonso on Sat May 22, 2010 12:49 am

i appreciate your comment bro thank you
and you know dis poem is about zohir's feelings.
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Post by w_ch on Sat May 22, 2010 2:27 pm

Hello,

I like this one better, I don't know why. You have the soul of a poet, though I'm not the good person to judge. Carry on brother Smile
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Re: Regrets

Post by the youth on Sat May 22, 2010 4:59 pm

I was told once by a friend..one that has flown away like Poe has said..that you'll regret no matter what you do..regret waits..you do..you don't do..one thing is certain..you'll regret..
Hoping he was wrong..i let him say those.

Nice poem al..
ya won't regret it don't worry.
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Re: Regrets

Post by HOPE4EVER on Sat May 22, 2010 5:09 pm

it is a great bro carry on you are really skilled

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Re: Regrets

Post by jamie on Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:31 pm

Good job alonso i do like this poem
i cann't forget but i forgive
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Re: Regrets

Post by Alonso on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:02 pm

thank you jamie
but it's not workable for all situations
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