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THE CLOSEST FOR EVER

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THE CLOSEST FOR EVER

Post by debug on Mon May 03, 2010 3:48 pm

THE CLOSEST FOR EVER




BETWEEN YOU AND ME NO SPACE NO LIMITS BUT A WORD


THE SAME OPINIONS ,THAUGHTS THAT OUR MINDS HOLD


NO DISTANCE NO BARRIERS BUT SURE SOMETHING BEYOND


WHAT KEEPS US FAR FROM EACH OTHER IS FEAR IN A WORLD


FACE IN FRONT OF THE OTHER, A SIGHT GIVES BIRTH TO ANOTHER


EYES RAYS BISECT THE CROWDED SPACE EVEN IF YOU ARE FAR


YOU ARE THE FIRST OR I AM,WHO CARES,AS THERE IS SOMETHING TO SHARE


COVERED WITH SILENCE AND KINDNESS MAKE YOUR SOUL TO ME A DESIRE


HANDS AND LIPS CAN BE AN ARM BUT YOUR NOBLE HEART IS MY AIM


FEELINGS AND EMOTIONS WOULD BE SENSELESS IF YOUR HEART CHOSE LONELINESS


OH MY HEALING! YOUR ABSENCE WILL MAKE ME USELESS


LET DISTENY DESIDES WHAT CAME AND TRY TO FEEL WHAT I AM


IF HE DECIDES TO KEEP YOU AWAY ,I WILL NEVER SAY BYE BYE


FOR ME YOU WILL BE THE CLOSEST TILL I DIE


FOR SURE YOU WILL CAUSE THE LAST TEAR WHEN I CRY


A TEAR OF JOY NOT FEAR AS YOUR HEART WILL BE MY DEAR


IT IS ON YOU THAT I RELY TO MAKE TRUTH LIE


IT IS ON YOU THAT I RELY TO MAKE MY TEARS DRY


HERE OR THERE,WHO CARES AS IN FRONT OF MY EYE YOUR HEART LIE

FOR ME YOU WILL BE THE CLOSEST AFTER I DIE [/font][/size]
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Re: THE CLOSEST FOR EVER

Post by jamie on Mon May 03, 2010 5:51 pm

hi debug
nice words ......
no offence I didn't understand
FOR ME YOU WILL
BE THE CLOSEST TILL I DIE
FOR
ME YOU WILL BE THE CLOSEST AFTER I DIE
i appreciate
LIPS CAN BE AN ARM BUT YOUR NOBLE HEART IS MY AIM

waiting for more debug
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Re: THE CLOSEST FOR EVER

Post by tones of love on Mon May 03, 2010 10:46 pm

very good debug I feel as if you read my mind,so what about the next poem?????????
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Re: THE CLOSEST FOR EVER

Post by Londonhbb on Tue May 04, 2010 9:29 pm

Hi debug clear ideas nd ipressive feelings .
Ilike this one :
IF HE DECIDES TO KEEP YOU AWAY ,I WILL NEVER SAY BYE BYE
gud job debug .
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