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After you left me ............

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After you left me ............

Post by Big brother on Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:42 pm

I would like to introduce to you my first poem " After you left me" and i hope you like it.


Since that date i still remember

The broken day of December


Baby, you left me alone and pass away


And, i still miss the joy you painted on my face
everyday


We used to take hand by hand and walk under the
moonlight


Your eyes used to be bright in the darkest nights


Your smile used to revive my heart and make me forget
the cursed life


Your hight spirit used to bring me alive and tell me


“Hey! , don’t worry iam your beloved wife”


But now (to continued)................

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Post by Nounette on Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:47 pm

Nice One Big Brother !! I Waiting Since I Liked The Story !! Carry Ok Writing Brother !!
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Post by Mary on Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:57 pm

Wonderful Big Bro... I Really Loved it.......

Congratulations you're the Man !!!!

I'm looking forward reading the second part...

Good Luck

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Post by NANA on Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:07 pm

wonderful Big brother! Carry on brother! Smile
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Post by bryne_kh2000 on Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:08 pm

I did not know that you are so romantic big bro . nice start . i like your poem .
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Post by jamie on Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:39 pm

very nice big brother I'm eager to know the rest of your story
I wish it has a happy end.
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Post by Thewolf on Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:14 am

Nice words
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Post by cookie on Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:13 pm

i already gave u my opinion about it
nice words big bobo
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Post by Guest on Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:34 am

hey BBB, I like it so much....carry on.
reminding you by the next part of it....

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Post by Londonhbb on Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:52 am

Looking to read the 2nd part big bro . Nice starting !
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Post by Biba on Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:58 pm

I didn't know that we have such a good poet in here.
Nice job Big Brother . I expect more from you .
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Re: After you left me ............

Post by tones of love on Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:40 pm

oh brother so romantic but please don't stay a looong Age writing the 2nd part ok cos I'm waiting ok
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