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Broken heart

Post by jamie on Mon Mar 08, 2010 5:42 pm

Broken heart

My heart is broken
My happiness's been stolen
By some one who went away
I cannot find the words to say
That my life will stop here
No one will tell me listen or hear
Because I am alone
With a broken tone
I live among the stone
So I am alone
(A friend said:
Why I see this tear
Why I hear the sound of fear
Why all this grief
Tell me, tell me in brief)
Sorry dear
Mind my tear,
By his smile I was amazed
I did not know how it based
I thought he is an innocent one
I was so happy when he came
But,
He went away quietly
Taking my happiness unfortunately
(She answered back,
You should decided what are you going to do
As he had decided too)
I am tired
My heart has been fired
I want to shout and cry
But my eyes became dry
(She advised,
Forget the scene
And all what have you seen
From your mind you have to clean
Every sad event had been)
Iím strong not weak
But losing hope that I seek
Kept me bound
And killed my sweet sound .
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Re: Broken heart

Post by bryne_kh2000 on Mon Mar 08, 2010 5:48 pm

i really like your peom . Thank you
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Post by Nounette on Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:24 pm

Wow Jamie Amazing Poem !! Nice Words Dear Carry On Writing !! And I Wasn't Wrong When I Said That There Are Many Talents In This Forum !!
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Post by chinda on Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:40 pm

Wow,it is really nice Jamie. I liked it a lot.
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Post by NANA on Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:53 pm

That's amazing dear Jamie . cheers
Carry on writing dear.
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Post by Ezinma on Mon Mar 08, 2010 10:27 pm

Well done Jamie, I clap my hands for another talented poet. I love your poem, it touches deeply. Carry on and I hope joy fills your heart so that you enchant us with your sweet sound.

Best wishes sister!
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Re: Broken heart

Post by Hush on Tue Mar 09, 2010 12:49 am

I really find that poem a beautiful and sincere one. I am really glad to read all those works of art you're artfully crafting.
Carry on you've got the talent.
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Post by Londonhbb on Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:39 pm

Yeah it is a fantastic poem nd inspired speech . It touches the sad side of the self .
but keep hopeful mate !
gr8 piece of writing from u . Keep writing .
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Post by mimi cici on Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:20 am

Niiiiiice Jamie,very meaningful words,with a deap meanig.Carry on writing,we need more...
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Post by beowulf on Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:03 am

hello jamie
my heart was aching when I read your poem , and I was grieved at heart but sure you are brave ...........

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Post by wimened on Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:46 pm

Breathtaking poem Jamie.keep on writing. jouliya
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Re: Broken heart

Post by jamie on Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:00 pm

Hi mates
thank you so much for your encouragement ....
I used to write in arabic but because i joined this talent group i tried to do my best to write these humble words .
thanks again Hush for your help .

thx joker this is my first experience writing in english. I wish it will not be the last
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