love and hate
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love and hate
by asma Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:06 pm
its my first attemp i guess
and i think its not good enough
but iam tryin to do my best
wish u wll like this simple one
which is about hate and love
the thing tht iam always worried about
and say whts the dffrence btw hate nd love
yeh its me who wondered to know that....
shall i compare love to light,hate to dark?
love is the one cause people blind
why can love and hate be so alike?
is it easy to understand ppls mind?
or ther is another truth to find?
perhaps both love nd hate exist wth time
if u look for it its waste of time
when it's the right time u will be drawn
does not matter if it is love or hate
each is the essence of humanity.
but the only thing tht i know
i have not time to hate
the title of love is large enough for me to say
and i think its not good enough
but iam tryin to do my best
wish u wll like this simple one
which is about hate and love
the thing tht iam always worried about
and say whts the dffrence btw hate nd love
yeh its me who wondered to know that....
shall i compare love to light,hate to dark?
love is the one cause people blind
why can love and hate be so alike?
is it easy to understand ppls mind?
or ther is another truth to find?
perhaps both love nd hate exist wth time
if u look for it its waste of time
when it's the right time u will be drawn
does not matter if it is love or hate
each is the essence of humanity.
but the only thing tht i know
i have not time to hate
the title of love is large enough for me to say
asma- Number of posts : 46
Age : 32
Location : student
Registration date : 2010-08-25
asma- Number of posts : 46
Age : 32
Location : student
Registration date : 2010-08-25
Re: love and hate
by Ismailos2 Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:50 pm
WOW, for a beginner you're GREAT, very well written ! Carry on writing 
Dear Asma, you've got a talent, keep working on it x 
xx
Dear Asma, you've got a talent, keep working on it x xx
Ismailos2- Number of posts : 646
Age : 38
Location : Algeria
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Re: love and hate
by Thewolf Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:52 pm
very nice words...carry on writing mate ....read you soon
....read you soon
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asma- Number of posts : 46
Age : 32
Location : student
Registration date : 2010-08-25
Re: love and hate
by Guest Fri Oct 08, 2010 10:26 pm
I'm encouraging you to write more too dear, your words are very nice, thanks for sharing! 
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