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love and hate

Post by asma on Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:06 pm

its my first attemp i guess
and i think its not good enough
but iam tryin to do my best
wish u wll like this simple one
which is about hate and love
the thing tht iam always worried about
and say whts the dffrence btw hate nd love
yeh its me who wondered to know that....
shall i compare love to light,hate to dark?
love is the one cause people blind
why can love and hate be so alike?
is it easy to understand ppls mind?
or ther is another truth to find?
perhaps both love nd hate exist wth time
if u look for it its waste of time
when it's the right time u will be drawn
does not matter if it is love or hate
each is the essence of humanity.
but the only thing tht i know
i have not time to hate
the title of love is large enough for me to say
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Post by asma on Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:38 pm

tell me is it so bad? euh11 Embarassed
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Post by Ismailos2 on Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:50 pm

WOW, for a beginner you're GREAT, very well written ! Carry on writing Smile Dear Asma, you've got a talent, keep working on it x Wink xx
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Post by Thewolf on Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:52 pm

very nice words...carry on writing mate Smile ....read you soon
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Post by asma on Fri Oct 08, 2010 7:17 pm

thanx mate for encouragin me .... Smile
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Post by Guest on Fri Oct 08, 2010 10:26 pm

I'm encouraging you to write more too dear, your words are very nice, thanks for sharing! Very Happy

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