lonliness
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Thewolf
Toufikzad
chum
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lonliness
loliness lonliness lonliness
in every corner; in evrey place
in life I see my self alone in
DARKNESS
My heart always crys in silent
crys befor eyes
and BLOOD not tears like usual
no hears my crying and pain
Oh! some times I feel better
since I recognize that Iam living in
a midmost of the darked forest
ther is no light just stones and
teers shares this pain with me
that is that is the time
WHEN I FEEL AT EASE
some times I try to forget
every things in the world
and begin to tast the light
BUT...!!!
No; I can't and Iwill
NEVER can
I submit;this is my fate
and distiny
to live in my own world
IN TE DARKNESS
in every corner; in evrey place
in life I see my self alone in
DARKNESS
My heart always crys in silent
crys befor eyes
and BLOOD not tears like usual
no hears my crying and pain
Oh! some times I feel better
since I recognize that Iam living in
a midmost of the darked forest
ther is no light just stones and
teers shares this pain with me
that is that is the time
WHEN I FEEL AT EASE
some times I try to forget
every things in the world
and begin to tast the light
BUT...!!!
No; I can't and Iwill
NEVER can
I submit;this is my fate
and distiny
to live in my own world
IN TE DARKNESS
chum- Number of posts : 3
Age : 34
Registration date : 2010-05-06
Re: lonliness
waw.....
well....hello there...
I hope that u r fine...
I find that what u've already written here is very good...wonderful...
actually..i find it very easy 2 understand ...very easy 2 deal with..
simple words ... but very hard tone...any way...thanx a lot
take care
read u soon nchallah
well....hello there...
I hope that u r fine...
I find that what u've already written here is very good...wonderful...
actually..i find it very easy 2 understand ...very easy 2 deal with..
simple words ... but very hard tone...any way...thanx a lot
take care
read u soon nchallah
Re: lonliness
Sufferance make poets sometimes
Nice expressing to your feelings
Darkness isn't something awful
Nice expressing to your feelings
Darkness isn't something awful
Thewolf- Number of posts : 1050
Age : 424
Location : Desert
Registration date : 2010-01-12
Re: lonliness
Nice poem. I did not see it before. Nice job
bilinda- Number of posts : 250
Age : 35
Location : neverland
Registration date : 2009-11-03
MaGGiE- Number of posts : 119
Age : 34
Location : in the heart of mum
Registration date : 2010-07-18
Re: lonliness
thank's friends not bcz u enjoy the poem but you share with me the feeling of pain and sorrow
darkness- Number of posts : 4
Age : 36
Registration date : 2010-03-07
Re: lonliness
hello
good,you have expressed your sorrow in good way so you make us feel you
keep hope chum and you too darkness smile to life it will smile to you
good,you have expressed your sorrow in good way so you make us feel you
keep hope chum and you too darkness smile to life it will smile to you
jamie- Number of posts : 57
Age : 35
Registration date : 2010-01-31
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