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lonliness

Post by chum on Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:25 pm

loliness lonliness lonliness
in every corner; in evrey place
in life I see my self alone in
DARKNESS
My heart always crys in silent
crys befor eyes
and BLOOD not tears like usual
no hears my crying and pain
Oh! some times I feel better
since I recognize that Iam living in
a midmost of the darked forest
ther is no light just stones and
teers shares this pain with me
that is that is the time
WHEN I FEEL AT EASE
some times I try to forget
every things in the world
and begin to tast the light
BUT...!!!
No; I can't and Iwill
NEVER can
I submit;this is my fate
and distiny
to live in my own world
IN TE DARKNESS

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Re: lonliness

Post by Toufikzad on Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:21 pm

waw.....

well....hello there...
I hope that u r fine...

I find that what u've already written here is very good...wonderful...
actually..i find it very easy 2 understand ...very easy 2 deal with..
simple words ... but very hard tone...any way...thanx a lot
take care
read u soon nchallah
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Re: lonliness

Post by Thewolf on Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:20 pm

Sufferance make poets sometimes
Nice expressing to your feelings
Darkness isn't something awful
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Re: lonliness

Post by bilinda on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:22 pm

Nice poem. I did not see it before. Nice job
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Re: lonliness

Post by MaGGiE on Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:23 am

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Re: lonliness

Post by darkness on Tue Jan 18, 2011 10:46 pm

thank's friends not bcz u enjoy the poem but you share with me the feeling of pain and sorrow

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Re: lonliness

Post by jamie on Tue Jan 25, 2011 7:53 pm

hello
good,you have expressed your sorrow in good way so you make us feel you
keep hope chum and you too darkness smile to life it will smile to you jouliya
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