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Dreadful News

Post by imy on Tue May 12, 2009 8:33 pm

Ascary voice is heard aloud
Coming britly from a lofty cloud
About an orphan boy
who was playing in joy
but gloomy news hit as thunder blew
That pushes him to the ultimat flaw
Where no sadness no grief is allowed
In a world,where only hatred is followed
He stends for a minute to recover
But his fortune is discovered
To live without friends is believable;
to live without parents is impossible.
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Re: Dreadful News

Post by Hush on Wed May 13, 2009 11:30 pm

It's not bad so I wish you'll carry on and be a great poet.

Read you soon
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Post by faith forever!! on Mon May 25, 2009 11:38 pm

oh I like your poem a lot...... and by the way the topic is interesting keep going and read you soon...bye
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Re: Dreadful News

Post by Thewolf on Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:36 pm

To live without friends is impossible too. Friendship is salt of life.
But where we should find those friends!
Come back to writing Imy, your words are really beautiful.
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Post by MaGGiE on Sun Aug 08, 2010 10:55 pm

so beautiful ..........thnx dear

read u soon
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