Regrets
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Regrets
It is a wind of memories that scorches my soul
Leaving on my heart the trace of a blade
These visions of a past that I can not forget
On the one mistake that I could not forgive
The blaze of agony from inside me burning
Leave me stalled deep in my heart
I lost my light in the story, I only have the black
Could I get out one day, I still dare to believe
What I'm trying to fill empty but is never satisfied
I was filled with pain that can not be ignored
So I cry, I cry, but it did not finish
How to continue to live with any regrets.
Alonso- Number of posts : 57
Age : 36
Location : NY
Registration date : 2009-05-18
Re: Regrets
Don't cry Alonso. You are surrounded by your brothers ... Ireally liked what you have written ..... Thank you
bryne_kh2000- Number of posts : 175
Age : 35
Location : NEVERLAND
Registration date : 2009-05-07
Re: Regrets
hold hope always in your heart coz it is the candle that will enlighten you darkness.great job brother keep writing.
bilinda- Number of posts : 250
Age : 35
Location : neverland
Registration date : 2009-11-03
Re: Regrets
thank u sista ..
here i am pessimistic but in my life i am optimistic...
here i am pessimistic but in my life i am optimistic...
Alonso- Number of posts : 57
Age : 36
Location : NY
Registration date : 2009-05-18
Re: Regrets
Don't regret about something passed Alonso... try to forget it and start again... Today is always a new day...Good work, carry on Alonso
chinda- Number of posts : 399
Age : 124
Location : Starland
Registration date : 2009-11-03
Re: Regrets
Alonso it's really tough to stay thinking about the past . Try to leave the moment . By the way u have the skills of being a famous poet . Carry on bro !!
Londonhbb- Number of posts : 583
Age : 35
Registration date : 2009-05-15
Re: Regrets
thats what i am doing london hbb . but this poem i wrote it for my friend who still regret about all the things that he has done....
thank u chinda londonhbb for your comments..
thank u chinda londonhbb for your comments..
Alonso- Number of posts : 57
Age : 36
Location : NY
Registration date : 2009-05-18
Re: Regrets
Hello Alonso
let me start with the negative points...
1/it is short one
2/it is about darkness with no hope or happy end..
the possitive points....
u have already chosen a great title...
u make the link with ideas in very high way...
u talked about something touch the feelings before the mind...
thanx alot for all what u write ...try to write more and make it taller pliz
accept my best regards....read u soon
let me start with the negative points...
1/it is short one
2/it is about darkness with no hope or happy end..
the possitive points....
u have already chosen a great title...
u make the link with ideas in very high way...
u talked about something touch the feelings before the mind...
thanx alot for all what u write ...try to write more and make it taller pliz
accept my best regards....read u soon
Re: Regrets
i appreciate your comment bro thank you
and you know dis poem is about zohir's feelings.
and you know dis poem is about zohir's feelings.
Alonso- Number of posts : 57
Age : 36
Location : NY
Registration date : 2009-05-18
Re: Regrets
Hello,
I like this one better, I don't know why. You have the soul of a poet, though I'm not the good person to judge. Carry on brother
I like this one better, I don't know why. You have the soul of a poet, though I'm not the good person to judge. Carry on brother
Re: Regrets
I was told once by a friend..one that has flown away like Poe has said..that you'll regret no matter what you do..regret waits..you do..you don't do..one thing is certain..you'll regret..
Hoping he was wrong..i let him say those.
Nice poem al..
ya won't regret it don't worry.
Hoping he was wrong..i let him say those.
Nice poem al..
ya won't regret it don't worry.
the youth- Number of posts : 281
Age : 36
Location : Home..where the heart is
Registration date : 2009-06-02
Re: Regrets
it is a great bro carry on you are really skilled
HOPE4EVER- Number of posts : 29
Age : 33
Location : IT doesn t matter but in the peace land
Registration date : 2009-06-26
Re: Regrets
Good job alonso i do like this poem
i cann't forget but i forgive
i cann't forget but i forgive
jamie- Number of posts : 57
Age : 35
Registration date : 2010-01-31
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thank you jamie
but it's not workable for all situations
but it's not workable for all situations
Alonso- Number of posts : 57
Age : 36
Location : NY
Registration date : 2009-05-18
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