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Post by chinda on Sat May 22, 2010 12:57 am

Let me, on this tree, perch
And play on that branch
Let me fly, don't cut my wings
Let me try, don't chain my hands
Let me do what I want
Because life is too short

When I die, visit my tomb
But don't cry on it or sob
Visit me every Friday
Don't forget, for my soul, to pray
Plant on my grave an olive tree
And invite birds to live next to me

Remember me every day
When you look at the sky
Remember me at night when you stare
At the moon with a far star
Remember that we will meet one day
Where there is no goodbye.
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Post by Londonhbb on Sat May 22, 2010 1:28 am

It's really a poet taste . Very gorgeous words . everyone loves the eternal meeting because being apart is tough
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Post by tones of love on Sat May 22, 2010 8:52 pm

thank you dear chinda wonderful words,touch the heart and the soul .
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Post by Alonso on Sat May 22, 2010 8:55 pm

nice one chinda . this remeber us the truth and what is waiting for us..
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Post by chinda on Sun May 23, 2010 12:54 am

Thanks a lot mates for your beautiful words...
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Post by acamy on Sun May 23, 2010 3:40 am

nice one chinda carry on wriing you are very good
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Post by haku on Sun May 23, 2010 12:21 pm

PERCH AND FLY BUT DONT BREAK THE TREE BRANCHS... NICE WORDS
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Post by Thewolf on Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:54 am

What meaningful words Chinda, your poems always the best for me, because you mention what i like, night and moon...
Waiting more...
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Post by Thewolf on Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:12 pm

Did they let you reach your aim or not yet?
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Post by MaGGiE on Fri Aug 06, 2010 6:14 pm

thank u chinda for those meaningful words cheers .........u r wonderful in writing Smile
keep writing dear.
read u soon
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Post by MrL on Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:18 pm

Outstanding!! as usual dear <3
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Post by messi on Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:51 pm

Really good! a real poet!
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Post by chinda on Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:59 pm

Thanks a lot, mates. Really, rejoiced I am by your encouraging words.
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Post by jamie on Sat Nov 27, 2010 10:57 pm

hello dear chinda it is really a wonderful poem i like it
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Post by asma on Mon Dec 06, 2010 4:07 pm

nice poem i like it .........; coooleuh
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Post by NANA on Fri Dec 10, 2010 4:04 pm

It's amazing dear!!!
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