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Post by bilinda Fri May 14, 2010 10:44 pm

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Now i’v
decided to forget you


To forget
all what we have been through


Now I’v
decided to take back my love


And to free
it in the sky of the lovers as a dove


Now I’v
decided to throw your memories away


And to stop
praying each night so you may stay


Now I’v
decided to forget your name


Your
existence as your absence ,for me, are the same


Now I’v
decided to let you ,as a disdainful past, behind


The eyes
that once loved you are no longer blind


Now I’v
decided to follow my shadow and walk alone


You are no
longer ,for me , a precious stone


Now I’v
decided to close my heart with golden keys


And live
the rest of my life at an eternal ease.
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Post by NANA Fri May 14, 2010 11:51 pm

Dear!! It's really a wonderful one, i'm happy that you wrote those words valediction Icon_wink . Carry on writing dear..but it made me valediction 5116 .
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Post by Londonhbb Fri May 14, 2010 11:58 pm

• Words hold deep meaning !!
• What a serious decision . I like it all but this one:
"The eyes
that once loved you are no longer blind". But it still my local point of view Wink
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Post by chinda Sat May 15, 2010 12:07 am

What a hard decision you have taken Bilinda!!... Good job girl and nice poem as usual...Carry on...
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Post by bilinda Sat May 15, 2010 1:07 am

thanks mates i appreciate it from you
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Post by Guest Sat May 15, 2010 2:05 am

It's very nice Bilinda.......waiting more from you our poet.

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Post by w_ch Sat May 15, 2010 1:27 pm

Wow! speechless, I am. It takes one a life-time to forget the loved ones, and I could see through your words that you did it in no time. Very emotional, deep hidden meaning( it's not so hidden acually, you were brave enough to give us some hints)and the words you choose, to me,made you sound very strong and willing to go through your decision to the furthest point. I like your decision valediction 39967
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Post by bilinda Sat May 15, 2010 2:24 pm

thanks w_ch
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Post by tones of love Sat May 15, 2010 7:14 pm

ohhhhhhh dear billinda is the right decision keep on.
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