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Nightmares

Post by Alonso on Thu May 20, 2010 6:45 pm

Alone in the dark, trying not to believe
My dream lost soul without knowing
I would resist, but I have not the power
I can not think about what does not make sense
All these stories come out of my memory
But how do you not see them
Find the answer in my memories
Not to mention that one should not lie
It's every night
I wake up in the dark
Disturbed by the same nightmares, repeating again and again
Until I can no longer close my eyes
risk of relapsing into mourning
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Re: Nightmares

Post by chinda on Fri May 21, 2010 12:57 am

Carry on Alonso...good
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Re: Nightmares

Post by Londonhbb on Fri May 21, 2010 1:34 am

Hope it's not as real as u described unless u would harm ur self bro
Keep writing u r in the poet's path bro
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Re: Nightmares

Post by Alonso on Fri May 21, 2010 1:02 pm

dont worry london hbb thank you.
thank u too chinda.. (Wink
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Re: Nightmares

Post by Toufikzad on Sat May 22, 2010 12:47 am

Hello Alonso...

nice one...let me tell u why i find it great ...
1/ i felt that it is real...and i do think that it is real ..
2/ u have organized the ideas...in a wonderful way...

but u didn't put an end ...or u didn't make us feel that there is an end...we wish to find happy end to the nightmares...as a hope for example...

even it is short but it is so nice...carry on brother ...let us read u more

best regards
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Re: Nightmares

Post by TM2010 on Sat May 22, 2010 2:13 am

good carry on Alonso
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Re: Nightmares

Post by w_ch on Sat May 22, 2010 2:24 pm

Hello,

You're never alone. Just remember, after a long dark night, dawn would be just around the corner, waiting for the right moment to appear. Its appearence is a must so, don't be pissimist and never lose hope. No matter how long the situation might take, it will soon come to its end.
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