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Don't Give Up

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Don't Give Up

Post by wimened on Tue Apr 20, 2010 11:45 pm

don't be lost , just open your eyes and look around you
if sadness chased you don't give it a chance to catch you
for a moment you are weak pulled down trapped by evil fire
that will makes you burn and your pain arise higher
trust yourself and don't be a liar
with arsenic your soul will be poisoned
hold on and prepare your arsenal and armada
just to make for evil a parada
this will make you wake up
certainly evil will give up
like a star you'll shine up
don't give it a chance to stand up
but make its plans a real flop
don't try to look back, leaf through and simmer your pains down
trust your creator you will never be alone
be a good fighter and defend your safe home
hear and try to be a good listener
open your eyes and look further
get away from failure and try to be a good worker
keep moving with your life
rise your head and look ahead
don't stare in the empty space
keep going and draw a smile on your face
remember,
it's good to cry no matter if like a bomb you explode
let your tears run like a flood
as the globe exploded with volcano covered the earth
with a rain, slowly it was a perfect world new birth.

wimened.
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by NANA on Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:58 am

My words betrayed me, what can I say? It's amazing dear. Actually your words touched me deeply Wimened, very expressfull piece of writing. I should work with it and not give up Smile .
Keep writing dear and never give up Wink .
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by Thewolf on Wed Apr 21, 2010 2:51 pm

Planty of advise, they r really beautiful words "if sadness chased you don't give it a chance to catch you" i like this expression very much... carry on dear mate
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by chinda on Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:49 pm

Nice poem Wimened... well timed...
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by w_ch on Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:04 pm

Hello,

This poem is one of the few that caught my attention. Hope is like a candle that shows us the way once in a "heart of darkness"
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by tones of love on Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:18 am

Thanks for these words hope so that all of us will never give up......especially you ........my dear mate
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by jamie on Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:03 am

Hello wimened
very nice poem
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by Guest on Sat Apr 24, 2010 1:34 am

what poets we have here?!! Wimened, I cannot express my feeling while reading what u wrote, really nice, keep on my friend.
snow.flower , u seem hopeless through ur nice words, so just take the advices of Wimened and "don't give up"!

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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by bryne_kh2000 on Sat Apr 24, 2010 11:05 am

What a beautiful poem you have written here wimened.  Congratulations
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by sandrilla on Sat Apr 24, 2010 1:13 pm

Very nice words mates......carry on writing.
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Re: Don't Give Up

Post by wimened on Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:21 pm

Thank you very much indeed my friends. jouliya
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