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Path to a thought ..

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Path to a thought ..

Post by Alonso on Sun Apr 11, 2010 6:14 pm

A blank page in a notebook,
A pencil between my fingers,
Jumble of words ...
A journey that begins,
At the heart of itself ...
Words, a sentence ... a verse?

Eyes - moon - soul
As always when I look at your eyes,
Under the rays of the silvery moon,
I lose myself ...
As always, it seems to me that your glance
You steal my soul ...

Emotion - loss
Our emotions sometimes too strong
We conduct our own downfall ...

Unmoved - emotion
Behind a face impassive often hide much more emotion
That never could express the most expressive face

Dream - tears - joy - Complaint
My laughter is heard crying,
In my cries of joy hear complaints,
Do not be fooled by these masks attractive
Do not let me lose myself in my darkness ...


"I really feel that every time I return to the first person ...
Is this a form of egotism? "

Selfishness ... Who else but yourself to think better of us?
So if I do not think I
Who will?
Is it really so bad, selfishness?

Word - Silence
Silence is the most revealing words.
The words in our mouths, come and go ...
Our tongues loosen and loosen our lips
To make hundreds and thousands ...
But these words are vain,
Only silence expresses our truths ...

The words dance in my head that I do not know what to do ...
Thousands of words but meaningless nowhere ...
Here sounds the end
My muse has lost my pencil and write more ..
Who likes, I leave the task of pursuing the course of these thoughts ...
Catch the muse and let yourself be seduced,
It will show you the treasure hidden words.
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Re: Path to a thought ..

Post by chinda on Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:06 am

Nice thoughts and beautiful words Alonso...
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Post by Alonso on Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:30 pm

thank you chinda..
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Post by jamie on Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:11 pm

hello

very nice alonso I like it so much ..............
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Post by Alonso on Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:50 pm

thanks mate Smile
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Post by Londonhbb on Tue Apr 13, 2010 5:48 pm

so impressive from u bro . Attractive thoughts and gorgeous words
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Post by Nounette on Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:41 pm

Amazing Words Alonse !!
I Really Liked It !!
Read You Soon Brother !!
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Post by flower on Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:56 pm

good alonso
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Post by the youth on Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:31 pm

I was waiting to read Pink Floyd written below..
pretty peom Alonso..philosophy..and beauty.
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Post by burself on Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:54 am

great alonso, well organized and personally i like your ideas...
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Post by Alonso on Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:18 pm

thank you burself
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Post by Thewolf on Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:51 pm

very nice words.
MOON, what a lovely place it is! thank u very much coz u mentioned it in ur beautiful poem.
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Re: Path to a thought ..

Post by Toufikzad on Mon Apr 19, 2010 6:32 pm

Well,well,well...Alonso...I'm so sorry that i'm the last one who reply...
Ok...even i'm so late ...but here is my opinion dear brother..
Well...I never expect to read such words from u...
let me say it in a breaf way...It's a wonderful..
but ....as i always say.... where is the rythm man...???
I know that this is ur style of writing...but please...just try to write in poetic ...i mean in classic poetic way ...please...
so...thanx alot for this wonderful words ...it's some how hazy ...but so clear ...understand!!???
thanx ...ciao
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Post by w_ch on Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:14 pm

Wellah I had the same impression as the youth's. I was waiting for the name "Edgard Allan Poe" or some famous poet, and yet I found none. At first, I thought you forgot to mention the poet, then I found out later on, that it was you who wrote it!! Very impressive my friend , carry on and never give up!
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Post by beowulf on Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:41 pm

thank you so much Alonso...

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