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Dream Land

Post by chinda on Sun Mar 28, 2010 2:32 pm

Dream Land

Please take me away
Where we used to stay
Just you and me
Without any enemie
Far away from this world
Where everything is odd
To a land everything is light
Even when it is midnight
Where the sun to us smiles
And the stars for us rise
Where the moon with us sits
Telling us his secrets
Where the birds singing
To their broods our story telling
To a willow tree we sit
Take an oath beneath it
To spend this life together
On this land forever.
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Post by Londonhbb on Sun Mar 28, 2010 2:38 pm

awesome chinda . Hope u'll meet ur dream land someday .
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Re: Dream Land

Post by Guest on Sun Mar 28, 2010 2:40 pm

as usual Chinda, very nice.........Keep writing dear.

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Post by Thewolf on Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:48 pm

Dream Land. Only wings of angels can take you there, dream land is far from our feet, but so close to our hearts.
very nice words Chinda, some day you will fly there...with the angel who deserve be or partner.
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Post by The Bird Man on Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:15 pm

Nice poem Chinda, great...
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Post by bilinda on Sun Mar 28, 2010 7:49 pm

ahhhhh dear chinda so amazing.i liked it but i have to tell you something i'am already in dreaming land
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Post by mimi cici on Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:10 am

Nice words Dear,go ahead Chinda.We are waiting for more.
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Re: Dream Land

Post by Thewolf on Mon Mar 29, 2010 2:19 am

Dream land is, the place that we will never reach it.
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Post by chinda on Tue Mar 30, 2010 9:28 pm

Thanks a lot mates, I really appreciate your comments.
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Post by Thewolf on Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:33 pm

I wonder what are you goin to write when you really find your dream land!
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Post by MaGGiE on Sun Aug 08, 2010 11:09 pm

very good chinda ......carry on
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Post by jamie on Tue Jun 07, 2011 3:04 pm

nice chinda lol!
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