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BITTER REMEMBERANCE

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BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by haku on Sun Mar 14, 2010 6:27 pm

CRY MY HEART..SOB AND AGAIN CRY
SCATTER YOUR BURNING TEARS ON THE LAND OF -GOOD BYE-
BEAT STRONGLY AS MUCH AS YOU CAN....PERHAPS
YOU BRING SOME SWEET MEMORIES TO MY EYES
FEEL THE THORNS OF THIS SADNESS AND SORROW
PRBABLY THERE IS SOME HAPPINESS YOU CAN BORROW
CRY..BEAT..FEEL.....YES I UNDERSTAND
AGAIN AND AGAIN....YES I COMPREHEND
YOU ARE NEITHER THE FIRST NOR THE LAST TO GRUMBLE AND SAY
"I WISH THAT THE SHINY SUN REMAINS IN THE CORE OF THE SKY"
..NIGHT MUST DARKLY FALL...BUT YOU CAN FIND THE MOON AND THE STARS
THEY ARE NOT SO BRIGHT;HOWEVER.....
THEY HAVE THEIR WEAK BEAMS
THAT WAS THE LIFE I REMEMBER
AND THESE ARE....MY MEMORIES
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Re: BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by NANA on Sun Mar 14, 2010 7:08 pm

Hi, nice words Haku. We are waiting for more. jouliya
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Re: BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by haku on Sun Mar 14, 2010 7:17 pm

thank you very much
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Re: BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by jamie on Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:55 pm

Hi haku
tears can help us to feel better . It is a mercy from our God.....
We should keep hope always and keep the beautiful memories.
be strong haku and don't make yr heart cry........
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Re: BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by bryne_kh2000 on Sun Mar 14, 2010 11:24 pm

Haku ,i really liked your poem . May be bacause it tackles one of the subject that i like . thank you Sir , and please keep on writing
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Re: BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by Aditya on Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:35 am

hello
life is not worthy so my brother don't cry ...............
be optimist.......
i'm waiting to read more

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Re: BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by Thewolf on Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:01 pm

Oneday i found tears are useful, only real friends deserve your tears. nice words man
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Re: BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by glourious on Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:19 pm

I like it.
waiting for a "happy" poem!
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Re: BITTER REMEMBERANCE

Post by mimi cici on Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:06 pm

Nice words friend,but you should cry only for the one who deserves.you shouldn't be upset.Take it easy...
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