A day at the countryside
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A day at the countryside
A day at the countryside
I recalled a day when I was an infant
And how during the holidays I was sent
To the countryside where lives my aunt.
I checked my pockets...not a single cent
So,I was off to the forest though was told:"you can't"
Not aware of my position,still I went
And followed the seduction of a fower's scent.
So surprised to see such a harmless plant
produce this attractive smell which seemed permenant
Infront of it,So helpless was I that I bent
And Accepted the offer the flower did present.
It was a journey I will never repent
A million dollars I shall surely grant
To whomever gives me that feeling of content.
Not any of the luxuries scientists keep invent
Nor the small world created by the internet
Can provide the peace that nature does represent.
I recalled a day when I was an infant
And how during the holidays I was sent
To the countryside where lives my aunt.
I checked my pockets...not a single cent
So,I was off to the forest though was told:"you can't"
Not aware of my position,still I went
And followed the seduction of a fower's scent.
So surprised to see such a harmless plant
produce this attractive smell which seemed permenant
Infront of it,So helpless was I that I bent
And Accepted the offer the flower did present.
It was a journey I will never repent
A million dollars I shall surely grant
To whomever gives me that feeling of content.
Not any of the luxuries scientists keep invent
Nor the small world created by the internet
Can provide the peace that nature does represent.
Re: A day at the countryside
Wow!!! Really wonderful W_ch i like it soooo much . Keep on mate
NANA- Number of posts : 143
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Re: A day at the countryside
You got me here man! thumb up
Hush- Number of posts : 529
Age : 39
Location : Dreaming land
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Re: A day at the countryside
beautiful W-ch. Nature is really an escapism for us especially when we have problems. What is beautiful than lying on the grass looking to the full moon and counting the twinkling stars, what is beautiful than sitting under a willow tree smelling roses' odour, what is beautiful than walking on the shore feeling the carasses of the breeze on your face. I think that nothing is beautiful than this.
chinda- Number of posts : 399
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Re: A day at the countryside
Perfect , very expressful , wishing you all the best in the next coming days !
TheUkrainian- Number of posts : 104
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Location : Deerfield, New York
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Re: A day at the countryside
Since the poem speaks of its self i won't say anything except that i m green with envy
black_white- Number of posts : 24
Age : 36
Registration date : 2009-11-12
Re: A day at the countryside
That's the one they are all talking about! Yeah I do like it W_ch. Really wonderful!
Carry on posting your beautiful writings.
Carry on posting your beautiful writings.
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