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I hate you my love

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I hate you my love

Post by chinda on Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:06 pm

I hate you , yes i do
I hate you because i love you
You entered my life without invitation
And sat in my heart without permition
I see you in every face
Even on the moon surface
You are living in my heart
But i have to cast you out
From my life you should disappear
And never come back my dear

From my heart you should go out
Without feeling any doubt
Oh God help me to do so
For i dare not tell him no
Help me to forget him
because he makes my life dim
Oh God if you hear me and this is sure
make me do not think about him any more
Give my eyes the power to stop shed tears
And my heart the might to stop its beats
because as my heart still beating
I will never forget his meeting
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Post by Londonhbb on Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:07 pm

yeah it's awesome thoughts from U Chinda . hope it's not real otherwise may ALLAH be with U . tongue
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Post by chinda on Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:54 pm

Hello mates,
thank you so much for your beautiful words, it is really an honor for me that you liked the poem.
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Post by NANA on Tue Dec 29, 2009 9:22 pm

Hi, amazing dear Chinda , you make me crying. it's really expressful wallah, this poem touch me . Keep on dear you're excelent . ya3omri1
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Post by bilinda on Wed Jan 06, 2010 8:58 pm

hi dear chinda ,and sorry for the late reply.i liked it so much it is amazing.continue shining my star
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Post by imy on Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:11 pm

It's really great chinda, my congratulations for you.keep it up.
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Post by glourious on Mon Mar 22, 2010 1:25 pm

No comment!

good job!
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Post by happy prince on Sat Apr 03, 2010 5:15 pm

I really liked your poem.It is well organized.Go ahead and never stop.

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Post by chinda on Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:41 pm

Thanks a lot for your encouraging words mates.
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Post by wimened on Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:18 pm

coooleuh
Very nice poem Chinda. jouliya
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Post by Thewolf on Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:28 pm

Hey Chinda...i read this poem in the day you posted it, i wanted be last commenter, then i forgot to comment
I don't belive you hate someone Chinda, just jump it
As usual, you are the best of the best
Keep writing dear.
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Post by cookie on Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:03 pm

Very nice poem Chinda
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Post by flower on Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:44 pm

very goooooooooooooooooooooooooooood chinda.........................amazing.......................... keep writing...
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Post by MaGGiE on Sun Aug 08, 2010 11:15 pm

so so so............beautiful.

carry on chinda
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Post by Guest on Tue Oct 05, 2010 10:52 pm

Wow, what a nice peom is this!!! wonderful Chiny! continue writing sweet friend!

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