I hate you my love
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I hate you my love
by chinda Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:06 pm
I hate you , yes i do
I hate you because i love you
You entered my life without invitation
And sat in my heart without permition
I see you in every face
Even on the moon surface
You are living in my heart
But i have to cast you out
From my life you should disappear
And never come back my dear
From my heart you should go out
Without feeling any doubt
Oh God help me to do so
For i dare not tell him no
Help me to forget him
because he makes my life dim
Oh God if you hear me and this is sure
make me do not think about him any more
Give my eyes the power to stop shed tears
And my heart the might to stop its beats
because as my heart still beating
I will never forget his meeting
I hate you because i love you
You entered my life without invitation
And sat in my heart without permition
I see you in every face
Even on the moon surface
You are living in my heart
But i have to cast you out
From my life you should disappear
And never come back my dear
From my heart you should go out
Without feeling any doubt
Oh God help me to do so
For i dare not tell him no
Help me to forget him
because he makes my life dim
Oh God if you hear me and this is sure
make me do not think about him any more
Give my eyes the power to stop shed tears
And my heart the might to stop its beats
because as my heart still beating
I will never forget his meeting
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Re: I hate you my love
by Londonhbb Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:07 pm
yeah it's awesome thoughts from U Chinda . hope it's not real otherwise may ALLAH be with U . 
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Re: I hate you my love
by chinda Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:54 pm
Hello mates,
thank you so much for your beautiful words, it is really an honor for me that you liked the poem.
thank you so much for your beautiful words, it is really an honor for me that you liked the poem.
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Re: I hate you my love
by NANA Tue Dec 29, 2009 9:22 pm
Hi, amazing dear Chinda , you make me crying. it's really expressful wallah, this poem touch me . Keep on dear you're excelent . 
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Re: I hate you my love
by bilinda Wed Jan 06, 2010 8:58 pm
hi dear chinda ,and sorry for the late reply.i liked it so much it is amazing.continue shining my star
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Re: I hate you my love
by imy Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:11 pm
It's really great chinda, my congratulations for you.keep it up.
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Re: I hate you my love
by happy prince Sat Apr 03, 2010 5:15 pm
I really liked your poem.It is well organized.Go ahead and never stop.
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Re: I hate you my love
by chinda Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:41 pm
Thanks a lot for your encouraging words mates.
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Re: I hate you my love
by Thewolf Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:28 pm
Hey Chinda...i read this poem in the day you posted it, i wanted be last commenter, then i forgot to comment 
I don't belive you hate someone Chinda, just jump it
As usual, you are the best of the best
Keep writing dear.
I don't belive you hate someone Chinda, just jump it
As usual, you are the best of the best
Keep writing dear.
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Re: I hate you my love
by flower Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:44 pm
very goooooooooooooooooooooooooooood chinda.........................amazing.......................... 
keep writing...
keep writing...
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Re: I hate you my love
by MaGGiE Sun Aug 08, 2010 11:15 pm
so so so............beautiful.
carry on chinda
carry on chinda
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Re: I hate you my love
by Guest Tue Oct 05, 2010 10:52 pm
Wow, what a nice peom is this!!! wonderful Chiny! continue writing sweet friend!
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