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Never lose hope

Post by w_ch on Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:25 pm

Never lose hope


Yesterday,during a sleepless night
The wind was blowing and making its daily flight,
Cats were raoming on the left and on the right,
And dogs were eager for anything to bite.
To get off my bed,I had to struggle and fight.

I stood up,walked slowly,and switched on the light
All of a sudden,my room turned to be bright.
In its four corners,I could see joy and delight.
Neither sadness,nor grief,not even any fright
were sensed in th room which the lamp did enlighten

So,don't be picimict,embrace hope with tight
And confident hands no matter how much is it slight.
Afterall,look what a devise hanging on an average height
Did to a room which had before blinded my sight
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Post by Ezinma on Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:44 pm

Well done you! I clap my hands. Nicely written it truly caught my attention. Never lose hope, carry on writing.
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Re: Never lose hope

Post by Hush on Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:15 pm

I really like it W_ch don't stop writing.
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Post by Guest on Mon Dec 21, 2009 10:41 pm

Hello W-ch, I really like it, it's great; carry on please.........YOU ARE SHINING

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Post by bilinda on Tue Dec 22, 2009 11:03 am

hi,and you say that you hate poetry hhinn .no just joking.as usual it is really nice ,and us usual i liked it .you know for me it takes so long to write a poem,but since you have the spirit of a poet you do it easily .i liked the topic you tackled that's what all we need,thank you.
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Post by chinda on Sat Dec 26, 2009 11:31 pm

Very nice poem W-ch. I really like it ,it really gives us what we are all in need in our lives ,the HOPE, which turns tears to smiles and sorrow to happiness.
Keep going brother.
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Post by Nounette on Sat Dec 26, 2009 11:36 pm

Wow , Very Nice One W_Ch Carry On , I really Like It !! Thank You Brother !!
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Post by safefast on Sat Dec 26, 2009 11:59 pm

Keep up the good work Mr.W-ch.It's really wonderful.I like it too much.Carry on.
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Re: Never lose hope

Post by w_ch on Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:56 pm

Helo mates,

Thank you so much for your replies;I really appreciate your comments
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Re: Never lose hope

Post by safefast on Tue Dec 29, 2009 1:00 am

I hope that all the mates try to write.We never know.There are many hidden talents.
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Post by mimi cici on Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:29 am

Good work w_ch,i like it so much,you really have got a talent,carry on my fried...
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Re: Never lose hope

Post by Thewolf on Mon Mar 29, 2010 2:17 am

No one can break the hope, if we help each other to cross the waves. nice words w_ch
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Re: Never lose hope

Post by w_ch on Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:05 pm

Thank you for your comments
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