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...To live another day...

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...To live another day...

Post by w_ch on Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:57 pm

To live another day


You'd say I'm strong and undefeated
Tough like a rock;would not cry.
Trusting yourself not to be disentigrated
For the pain will not find a way
Into your heart where it's not fitted.
Against the stormy troubles,you pass by
Holding your nose up;but there you cheated.
Nobody believes the hollow words you say
Nor the heroic actions you've emitated.
Trying to fool the others hoping to succeed...Nay!!!
You kept turning around and never admitted
That for the lost ones you had to pay
A high price and therefore were melted
in a circle of an intolerable pain;Now you pray
Allah help you forget the loved ones you arrasted
In you heart yet they mannaged to flee away.
Still,nevermind,you should be delighted
Because you are here to stay...To live another day.
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Post by NANA on Tue Dec 15, 2009 10:17 pm

A very nice poem w_ch, it's really good one ya3omri1.



Keep on.
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Post by TheUkrainian on Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:32 am

 very expressful  !
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Post by bilinda on Thu Dec 17, 2009 1:36 pm

salam my brother w-ch .i really liked the poem.it holds many hidden meanings ,and believe me it speak about all of us in a way,because we all want to show that we are strong ,but in fact we are so wrong .there is no one weak like us .we want to show the others how much we do not care about who hurt us ,but inside us there is a fire that turns our hearts into dust .we try to say we are brave of this we are so proud ,but once again the tears in our eyes betray us and say the contrast so loud .i'am reaally influenced keep going.oh it is another surprise
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Post by Guest on Fri Dec 18, 2009 2:22 pm

wonderful poem, well done...

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Post by bryne_kh2000 on Fri Dec 18, 2009 2:33 pm

That's what i call a  STANDARD  poem .
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Post by w_ch on Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:59 pm

Thanks a billion mates for your replies
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Post by Londonhbb on Mon Dec 28, 2009 10:16 pm

perfect poem
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Post by Nounette on Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:17 pm

You'll Be A Great Poet W_Ch !! Just Carry On Writting !! And Bilinda Too I Liked Your Reply !!
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