...To live another day...
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bilinda
TheUkrainian
NANA
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...To live another day...
To live another day
You'd say I'm strong and undefeated
Tough like a rock;would not cry.
Trusting yourself not to be disentigrated
For the pain will not find a way
Into your heart where it's not fitted.
Against the stormy troubles,you pass by
Holding your nose up;but there you cheated.
Nobody believes the hollow words you say
Nor the heroic actions you've emitated.
Trying to fool the others hoping to succeed...Nay!!!
You kept turning around and never admitted
That for the lost ones you had to pay
A high price and therefore were melted
in a circle of an intolerable pain;Now you pray
Allah help you forget the loved ones you arrasted
In you heart yet they mannaged to flee away.
Still,nevermind,you should be delighted
Because you are here to stay...To live another day.
You'd say I'm strong and undefeated
Tough like a rock;would not cry.
Trusting yourself not to be disentigrated
For the pain will not find a way
Into your heart where it's not fitted.
Against the stormy troubles,you pass by
Holding your nose up;but there you cheated.
Nobody believes the hollow words you say
Nor the heroic actions you've emitated.
Trying to fool the others hoping to succeed...Nay!!!
You kept turning around and never admitted
That for the lost ones you had to pay
A high price and therefore were melted
in a circle of an intolerable pain;Now you pray
Allah help you forget the loved ones you arrasted
In you heart yet they mannaged to flee away.
Still,nevermind,you should be delighted
Because you are here to stay...To live another day.
Re: ...To live another day...
A very nice poem w_ch, it's really good one .
Keep on.
Keep on.
NANA- Number of posts : 143
Age : 34
Location : Secret Garden
Registration date : 2009-10-29
Re: ...To live another day...
very expressful !
TheUkrainian- Number of posts : 104
Age : 37
Location : Deerfield, New York
Registration date : 2009-05-28
Re: ...To live another day...
salam my brother w-ch .i really liked the poem.it holds many hidden meanings ,and believe me it speak about all of us in a way,because we all want to show that we are strong ,but in fact we are so wrong .there is no one weak like us .we want to show the others how much we do not care about who hurt us ,but inside us there is a fire that turns our hearts into dust .we try to say we are brave of this we are so proud ,but once again the tears in our eyes betray us and say the contrast so loud .i'am reaally influenced keep going.oh it is another surprise
bilinda- Number of posts : 250
Age : 35
Location : neverland
Registration date : 2009-11-03
Re: ...To live another day...
That's what i call a STANDARD poem .
bryne_kh2000- Number of posts : 175
Age : 35
Location : NEVERLAND
Registration date : 2009-05-07
Re: ...To live another day...
perfect poem
Londonhbb- Number of posts : 583
Age : 35
Registration date : 2009-05-15
Re: ...To live another day...
You'll Be A Great Poet W_Ch !! Just Carry On Writting !! And Bilinda Too I Liked Your Reply !!
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