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Home sweet home!

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Home sweet home!

Post by w_ch on Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:26 pm

Men in every coulor and race
Are indulged in an endless chase
Nothing but happiness they desire
With a determination and souls on fire
"Is there such a thing?",someone said.
"Only in dreams",another replied.
"You're in a place where morals are a myth,
men and women are drowning in filth;
You're in a place where the rich are kings
Wearing crowns and also rings
And the poor are mere slaves
Living in homes much better like caves
In a place where nothing works,
A perfect envirement for the growing sharks."
He took the answear with a trembling ear,
And turned blue in a constant fear.
He walked away with a sense of despair,
Sadness and grief had filled the air.
Untill he reached his work place,
And looked Directly at his employer's face:
"Would you give me my last paycheck,
I swear to run away & never come back..."
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Post by NANA on Wed Dec 02, 2009 9:33 pm

Hello, that's wonderful w_ch it's really amazing, may God bless you . keep on.
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Post by bilinda on Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:53 am

hi .we have another poet here .to say the truth it is so nice .i liked it so much .so you are gifted also in poetry .keep going.i'am waiting another surprise from you
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Post by acamy on Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:27 am

very good poem
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Post by chinda on Fri Dec 11, 2009 6:21 pm

Really it is a nice poem,but why this gloomy view to life? we do not have to sink under the heavy load of despair,look to the full part of the glass ,and be sure that life is fair.
Read you soon.
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Post by w_ch on Mon Dec 28, 2009 10:03 pm

Thank you for your comments ladies (I'll try to be more optimist next time )...It's a promise.
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Post by Nounette on Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:23 pm

Sorry For The Late Reply !! But It's Well Done W_Ch !! Thank You For This Poem !! I like It !!
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