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Unfortune Day

Post by imy on Sat Jun 13, 2009 11:43 pm

Tears are asking permission
To be the core of my mission
When my pain glitters
And my joy whispers
Through a path signed by moaning
And overwhelmed by groaning
In a heart drowned by frown
Barried,but blossomed to a crown
Very sordid to be vanquished
And impossible to be vanished
It's a story decorated with sufference
But is accepted in silence.

jouliya
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Re: Unfortune Day

Post by Hush on Tue Jun 16, 2009 11:45 pm

It reminds me of one of my very old writings which is the following

Afflicted Being

A Heart morns a body
And scorns an agonizing life
The soul drowned within griefís tears
Lamented by a morning breeze
What to say about a being that ceased to be
About a life that ends to its end
Even if we say heís living
Halas! In Lethe makes his dwelling

Itís not to complain that I say
For my words are deaf and blind
In an attempt for ease to find
The fact is words ease the pain
Afraid of the latter using loathe
As for despair-boat coxswain

My friends I beg you pardon
For you my love is ardent
Halas! woe makes of my body a castle
Haunted by an alienated ghost of ever
When I know that in knowing Iíll come to never

PS: Excuse me twice, first for being posted in your topic and second for my shabby language.
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Re: Unfortune Day

Post by Ezinma on Wed Jun 17, 2009 12:17 am

Hello,
I feel like a little bug among you people! Very Happy
Hushspeare I think you know my opinion about your writings. Imy Imy, you're a wonderful talented poet, carry on I'm sure you'll be great!
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Re: Unfortune Day

Post by imy on Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:57 pm

Thanks very much for both of you Ezinma and Hush.I LIKED your poem Hush."talented poet" is very much untrue Ezinma. euh11 jouliya
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Re: Unfortune Day

Post by Thewolf on Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:31 pm

Are you a member since that time!
You are really a poet, i liked words you used
and what i like more: A story decorated with sufferance
Carry on writing Imy, why did you stopped?!
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Re: Unfortune Day

Post by MaGGiE on Sun Aug 08, 2010 10:40 pm

waw wonderful! there r a lot of good poets we don't know them ,among them imy & hush ,
keep writing mates i'm sure u will succeed inchallah........
cheers
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