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Post by paris-girl on Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:05 am

My friend of mine


I`m so lucky to have you around


You make my world so magical


Whatever I did


Whatever I said


Or made you mad,


You still my friend…whom I love


Your existence beside me something I need


And that what u always did


Through the hard times, and the good ones


And when the dark clouds of sadness gather round in my sky


Your shining smile will let it disappear


So no fear…anymore


That you are here


And never far …for me


And I can see,


That sparkle in your eyes


Every time I share with you my feelings


Our jocks, our songs, our secrets,


Our fun time that we`re spending it together


Are painting my life with the colors of the rainbow


And I know,


That only for you


I can scream loud


To tell the whole world


That I have a real friend


And that we shall be always together


Forever,


Till the end …true friends.
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Post by Guest on Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:33 pm



Sorry paris-girl! I have to quote it in this way so as to be able to read it. Thank you for this poem.



My friend of mine



I`m so lucky to have you around


You make my world so magical


Whatever I did


Whatever I said


Or made you mad,


You still my friend…whom I love


Your existence beside me something I need


And that what u always did


Through the hard times, and the good ones


And when the dark clouds of sadness gather round in my sky


Your shining smile will let it disappear


So no fear…anymore


That you are here


And never far …for me


And I can see,


That sparkle in your eyes


Every time I share with you my feelings


Our jocks, our songs, our secrets,


Our fun time that we`re spending it together


Are painting my life with the colors of the rainbow


And I know,


That only for you


I can scream loud


To tell the whole world


That I have a real friend


And that we shall be always together


Forever,


Till the end …true friends.

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Re: check out my first poem ever!

Post by Im_A_psychic on Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:55 pm

That's just lovely Smile Are you for real; this is your first time ? If so, then WOW, you're quite the talented poet Very Happy , keep up the creativity Wink
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Post by paris-girl on Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:53 pm

thank you guys ! actually i m not sure if i should call it poem ,i d rather prefer 2 call it lyrics to be sung ,cuz it is not well-rimed , and besides i can really sing
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Post by Im_A_psychic on Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:08 pm

That would be quite a show you'd put on if you sing ! I can't wait to hear your soothing voice lol ! Any chance, even 1 in a million, that I get to hear your voice ! You teased me, so you had it coming! Asking you to sing, that is lol
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Post by paris-girl on Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:18 pm

actually my friends say i can sing like an angel !
what a humble girl i am !
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Post by Im_A_psychic on Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:21 pm

So humble, bless you lol !! So, is that a yes ? I get to hear your voice lol ? I never heard an angel-like voice Razz xx I'd be delighted to hear yours, Paris Hilton. lol Razz
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Post by paris-girl on Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:22 pm

it wud b intoxicated !u sure u can handle it ?lol
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Post by paris-girl on Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:24 pm

y dont u join me in the chatbox?
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Post by Im_A_psychic on Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:24 pm

Bring it on, then lol. I've handled crazy, weird stuff ! How can't I handle an angelic voice ? lol Wink
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Post by Londonhbb on Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:43 pm

• It's a very nice poem Paris-girl. 4 sure u'll write better nd better.
• Frankly, I'm delighted that u have this poetic competence (nd u r from hbb Rolling Eyes )
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Post by sandrilla on Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:31 pm

nice Paris girl! love it though I dont believe in friendship, not anymore !!! and yeh you r from bb?? khiar ennas Razz Razz
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Re: check out my first poem ever!

Post by Dutty Nes on Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:36 pm

Nice keep working on it
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