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A Funeral

Post by bilinda on Fri Dec 17, 2010 9:44 pm

A Funeral

Under the rain, in the darkness alone.
Holding my heart that became a stone.
Going to the cemetery that is nearby
To bury you with your famous lie,
And to shed my final tears.
On the ghost that caused my fears.
And while i dig, and dig your grave.
I will try to free my soul that became your slave.
Instead of throwing, on your tomb, flowers
I will throw your memories, and all the hours
That i spent with you in vain,
And i will wash my sins by the falling rain.
Then i will come back home, alone, as i came
But with a past and a present that are not the same.
My past has a spot of shame,
And my present has a noble aim.
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Post by Guest on Fri Dec 17, 2010 11:07 pm

What a sorrowful spirit you have! That's the best and most courageous of what I have ever read from a WOman. Thank you bilinda

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Post by wonderland20 on Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:52 pm

what strong and expressive words,i congratulate you!
Do you mind telling us what times do you write,what inspaires your thoughts?,just curious Very Happy
salam
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Post by Londonhbb on Sat Dec 18, 2010 11:02 pm

Outstanding as usual bilinda ! keep on fascinating us Wink
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Post by bilinda on Sat Dec 18, 2010 11:41 pm

thank you mates so much.
wonderland i write whenever i fell inspired
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Post by Nacerpro on Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:00 am

As usual, "MEN" are always the victims. Very Happy

Wonderful bili. Congrats for that poem.

PEaCE.
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Post by Thewolf on Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:17 am

You congrating her Nacer afer she threw us in graves and covered us by memories?
The sun is suffering! pooooor sun!

I like what you write Bilinda, but you hurt a lot, slowly please!
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Post by NANA on Mon Dec 20, 2010 8:12 pm

Bilinda! what's this dear? really nice poem and really strong words! I just love it and i feel...
Thank you my dear Wink
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Post by Guest on Mon Dec 20, 2010 9:30 pm

Brillant poet as usual dear Blinda!! You've got a real talent!!! ya3omri1

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Post by MaGGiE on Tue Dec 21, 2010 1:21 am

wonderful poem!!!!!!!! thank u sister...you are a real poet...keep writing
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Re: A Funeral

Post by bilinda on Tue Dec 21, 2010 7:13 pm

thanks a lot mates cha3ir1
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Post by chinda on Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:24 pm

What a funeral it was, Bilinda!
Good job, darling, it is really amazing!
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