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Rhyming with Asma :p

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Rhyming with Asma :p

Post by Diamond Faith on Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:03 pm

this is the first thing that I wrote when I started getting intrested in Rhyming. I wrote it in a very late hour at night when I was trying to come out with a decent exam subjetct for my pupils. it is just a boredome randomness, yet I decided to share it over here , i thought may be some people will find it fun to read Laughing


On Skype I met this girl
Beautiful and sparkling like a pearl
Her name is Asma and she is sweet
Just like the chocolate you'd love to eat
I bet she's an angel a mermaid or a flower
Coz with her a day goes swiftly like an hour
On facebook sheís a rose and for her friends sheís a dream
Coz with the pureness that she has, she hears hearts if they scream
Oh dear Asma before I forget Iíll tell you this
With a hug and on your rosy cheek Iíll put a kiss
I wish the rest of your life will be like a fairy tail
And in the dictionary of your life you'll erase the word fail
Honey, youíre delightful youíre charming like a rose
You have sweetness and appeal over dose
So darling Asma always smile and enjoy your day
Always be happy and chase worries away
Pray be nice enough and my poem accept
Or I shall assume resentment of my gesture is what you felt
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In this lonely night am being attacked by a fly,
Wondering about me and am clueless why
She is making my head and my heart want to blow
And am too busy with a chick who makes my blood flow
Instead of being a teacher and prepare my test
Here I am letting rhymes out of my chest
In a short time, my lady you stole my heart
With an accurate evil precise wicked chart
I will be suing you in a week
Courts, judges and lawyers I shall seek
But no this heart won't sue this little doll
Coz in a hole into nowhere her smile made him fall
Some people are so sweet and tender like honey
& this quality can't be bought with diamonds and money
Am still struggling with the evil filthy fly,
And in few hours the sun will be in the middle of the sky
Well I gotta use some (flitox) and I'll see this fly
Waving to me with tears saying darling good bye
Dear Shakespeare, you see how humble I am when I say I ain't a pro
But will you reduce your bragging of course the answer is no
Keep making fun of me and saying yeah right
And you'll find yourself in a place with no air and no light
Iíll torture your body after I break your soul
You'll see how cold I am and dark like Cole
Making people cry and terrified is what I do best
Iíll make your heart stop beating in your chest
B lack dreams is what Iíll give you every night
Like being in a small box squeezing you tight
With my art Iíll wipe off your face this smile
Even if that will drag me into a law trial
But to be fair I rather rhyme with you than go to bed
Though I know your rubbish will cause pain to my head
This is what we call cheap tasteless crap
I chose to rhyme with you than have a long delicious nap
Dear sir around Diamond nobody dare
To snap or smile or even share the air
When I walk in I spread fear every where
Everybody holds his breath for a year
I am mean am cruel Iím a walking devil
Nobody can ever climb up to my level

So stay down to earth don't make me laugh
I speak for Mr. Satan Iím on his behalf
And now Iíll have to reveal my truth
Iím worse than swine flu or the ache in the tooth
You donít know me am brave am a hero am no quitter
To stop me from killing you my serial cold blood needs a heater
I will chap your silly ego like a fish
Before you know it youíll find it in a dish
Beating you will be easier than having water to drink
I can make you vanish from history in an eye blink
If you think you can beat my art, sir, youíre dreaming
Slaughtering your master pieces will be easy like sneezing
For a triumph with the pro like me you have no chance
So give up this art and choose to dance
Iíll raise my arrogance and spread my charm
As long as I worth it there will be no harm
Poor soul I can see youíre struggling to write a phrase
Why don't you quit with the few pride you have left before I decide to erase
You canít find anything that can light a candle to my art
So buzz off of my sight before I stab you in the heart
Youíre giving me a headache and soon your face I shall slap
But I know youíre a gentle man so youíll reward my cheek with a subtle tap
Nah before I slap you I rather die
Coz though I play rough Iím actually shy
Shakespeare says: my fair lady you blow me away,
I have no room in the world of art so I wouldnít stay
Oh Mr. Shack no tears are allowed here so pray stop
Or you would be hairless like a lollipop
I act wicked yet in real Iím just a small flower
I can make a really good sleepy princess in a tower
You wanna end this long night with a nice rhyme
& I wanna end it with a bitter glass of lime
Let me keep rhyming to my dear sister
With a gentle smooth delicate whisper
Poetry is your field it isnít mine
My field is dinner candles & wine
Enough with rhyming and straight to bed,
Youíre being defeated and in a while your tears will shed
Donít say that you lost while you tried to keep up with the pro
You did a good job so let's say it's a draw
No worries dear we'll have other days to do it again
But be sure of one thing you'll lose now and then

Assouma, time for me to close my eyes
& feel how a person feels when he dies
Good night I gotta shut the door
Iím loud when I sleep coz I snore
Donít worry girl Iíll just sleep
No need to be sad & start to weep


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Re: Rhyming with Asma :p

Post by sandrilla on Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:56 pm

I found it fun to read it Diamond Faith! Thanks dear.. Very Happy
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Post by bilinda on Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:37 pm

woooooooooooooooow, i wish i were that Asma lol. It is really amazing. So niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. You are so special one my dear sister, and i tell you something i'm a fan of you. cheers cheers cheers
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Post by Diamond Faith on Mon Nov 15, 2010 4:43 pm

Ohh am really flattered that u liked my nonsense dear ones ^^

Bilinda : I would love to write something about you one day when i get to know u better , , meanwhile u can change the name Asma by your own name , and consider these same words as adressed to you , I know that you are as an incridlibe person as my friend asma , and I cherich the fact that I know you.
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Post by bilinda on Mon Nov 15, 2010 5:00 pm

thank you Embarassed Embarassed Embarassed
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Post by glourious on Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:53 pm

It isamusing to read this poem:cheers: ...keep sharing Faith! cheers
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Post by Diamond Faith on Tue Nov 16, 2010 4:20 pm

U got it bro , am delighted to entertain you with my rubbish :p
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Post by Guest on Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:22 pm

Really funny!! You're so sweet Diamond Faith! I like all what you're posting!! Keep on dear sis... Cool

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Post by Diamond Faith on Tue Nov 16, 2010 10:12 pm

Angeleyes : thank you darling , and you're so lovely yourslef .
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Post by asma on Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:07 pm

wish iam that asma lool euh22 Embarassed
verry nice poem ....thanx for sharin it.....
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Post by Diamond Faith on Thu Nov 18, 2010 10:00 pm

Hey there Asma ; u can be the very Asma am adressing in this poem and it is effortless , u dont even have to change your name Very Happy
Seriousely The name here isnt the crucial point , it's just a randome name , and these words are adressed to every nice genuine net friend that we feel instantly connected with somehow , that we can penetrate the screan and touch his/her very soul ^^
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