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Blida Department of English: Free Stand to Stand Free :: Art and Aesthetics :: Thou art the Poet

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Post by imy Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:02 am




Once alone.....no!! captured by loneliness.......imprisoned within the volumes of my memory that i burried once........

A sudden glance to a past......away, along......signals to a dreadful incident......no!! set of helpless, frustrating episodes repeated again and again....stop! i'm fed up.....stop!......

My spirit knocked on permission's door to take its leave.........no answer!!.........

My heart still beats......in a void it beats.....tired......wants peace.........

Tears are dried but few.......waiting to fall.....no stay , i'm begging you just stay.........

Trust ......love are tools, not to be abused.........

Hold on my soul, i'm still standing!!..........Though..........
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Post by bilinda Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:04 am

Nice imy. Next time do your trip to the future.
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Post by cookie Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:07 am

nice wors imy keep on writing

i like the title so much
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Post by chinda Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:25 am

Nice work Imy, carry on sister. I liked so mush the last line:

Hold on my soul, i'm still standing!!..........Though..........





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Post by Guest Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:31 am

nice work Imy, carry on writing dear.

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Post by Thewolf Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:46 pm

Imy A Trip to The Past Icon_bounce
You know, i liked so much words you use, keep writing dear.
Wish read you soon.
Won't you go for a trip in future?
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Post by imy Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:17 pm

Thanks mates for your sweet words, very nice of you.......
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Post by mimi cici Sat Aug 14, 2010 6:17 pm

Very nice Imy...i really like it A Trip to The Past Icon_biggrin
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