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Post by manar on Fri Aug 06, 2010 11:41 pm

TeLl ThEm


i’ll be back..one day

And..I’ll never be the sAme



TeLl ThEm



that I’ll be..fine

Finally..i can do something right



TeLl ThEm



i don’t have more tears..to cry

I breakaway..and..i’ll keep try



TeLl ThEm



i was lost..inside

But not anymore..coz i found my brilliant light



TeLl ThEm



even I fell from..the sky

I still abOve all them..and they lost their fight



TeLl ThEm



that..i found my right way

i’m walking in it..i wanna go away



TeLl ThEm



the old me..is dead and gone

I became so hUrsh..just like the stone



TeLl ThEm



i don’t care about their comments..and their blaah…blaah

I ignore all them..and I stopped believing their lie..lie



TeLl ThEm



their masks were fallen..down

Ops..!! are so uGly inside..thus I can’t stay around



TeLl ThEm



that..i closed their stories

Now..i’m bUsy to make new memories



TeLl ThEm



they were so..wrong

When they thought..that I’ll never be that strong



TeLl ThEm



i can realize..my dreams

I’m a fighter..I burnt my old fears



TeLl ThEm



to let me..alone

I chose to be..in my own



TeLl ThEm



i..ah !!..u know what..?!..don’t tell them anything

Let the time to show them..everythings




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wRiTtEn..By.. someone i know
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Post by the bright queen on Sat Aug 07, 2010 1:26 am

Great work...
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Post by Thewolf on Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:05 pm

Very nice words
Let days show us what we don't know.
I liked last line.
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Post by MaGGiE on Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:12 pm

so beautiful poem...........& the colors increased it Magnificence
thank u dear manar...
waiting ur writing...
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Post by manar on Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:30 pm


thank you so much dear mates for your comments
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