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Post by bilinda on Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:55 pm

once i asked a star:
"little star
what made your home
in the sky very very far
is it chance
on your story please let me have a glance".
she said:"little girl do not worry
saty, and i tell you my story
years,years before
in time of yore
i was a stupid stone
and nothing more
whiout an aim to live for
one night i could not sleep
the wound in my heart was so deep
then i saw the moon
i wished if i could travel through air
to live beside the moon
i wished if i were there
but when i silenced my voice
my friends started to laugh
the incident on me was so tough
but i made my mind, and said it again so loud
of my self i was so proud
i climbed mountains
and passed fountains
i did not fear if i will die
my destination was the sky
but one day
i discovered that i lost my way
under a tree i started to cry
but before sleeping i said:
"i still have tomorrow i will try"
when i opened my eyes
i found myself beside the moon
i started screaming
i thought i was dreaming
then th moon said to me:
"you are not dreaming
what you see is true
i saw all what you have been through
i said to myself if i need a partner
for sure it is you"
so little girl learn from my story
if you want success and glory
you have to fight
work day and night
until you see your dreams beside you bright".
after that i wiped my tears
and threw my fears
and said :"because she could
of course i can.
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Post by Thewolf on Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:19 pm

Bravo Bilinda!
You really made me believe your story, what a nice words!
But star!
....your way wasn't so far, and the prove the sky is full of stars.
Stars are nothing, and the moon too ( with all my respect to moon lovers ) why we always ignore the sun? it burn us and we hate it yes, but what, what are moon, or stars...without sun,!!

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Post by chinda on Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:51 am

Wonderful, Bilinda...carry on dear.

I liked so mush these two verses:
I wished if I could travel through air
to live beside the moon
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Post by Guest on Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:18 am

Nice Bili, really nice, carry on dear.[/b]

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Post by Thewolf on Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:34 am

this is the most wonderful poem Bilinda wrote ( in my opinion) i really liked that travel ... Carry on ... soon soon you will touch the moon ...
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Post by bilinda on Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:56 am

Thank you mates so much. The wolf soon i will tell you nchallah what the sun represents for me.
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Post by Nacerpro on Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:12 pm

Outstanding bili, CONGRATULATIONS.
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Re: Little Star

Post by Londonhbb on Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:26 pm

It's really fantasitic poem, I remember ur presentation bilinda (they could so we CAN). I think u presented it right ?!
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Re: Little Star

Post by messi on Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:44 pm

Fascinating.
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