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After you left me ............

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Post by Big brother Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:42 pm

I would like to introduce to you my first poem " After you left me" and i hope you like it.


Since that date i still remember

The broken day of December


Baby, you left me alone and pass away


And, i still miss the joy you painted on my face
everyday


We used to take hand by hand and walk under the
moonlight


Your eyes used to be bright in the darkest nights


Your smile used to revive my heart and make me forget
the cursed life


Your hight spirit used to bring me alive and tell me


“Hey! , don’t worry iam your beloved wife”


But now (to continued)................

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Post by Nounette Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:47 pm

Nice One Big Brother !! I Waiting Since I Liked The Story !! Carry Ok Writing Brother !!
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Post by Mary Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:57 pm

Wonderful Big Bro... I Really Loved it.......

Congratulations you're the Man !!!!

I'm looking forward reading the second part...

Good Luck After you left me ............ Herz

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Post by NANA Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:07 pm

wonderful Big brother! Carry on brother! Smile
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Post by bryne_kh2000 Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:08 pm

I did not know that you are so romantic big bro . nice start . i like your poem .
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Post by jamie Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:39 pm

very nice big brother I'm eager to know the rest of your story
I wish it has a happy end.
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Post by Thewolf Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:14 am

Nice words After you left me ............ Icon_smile
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Post by cookie Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:13 pm

i already gave u my opinion about it
nice words big bobo After you left me ............ 129195
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Post by Guest Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:34 am

hey BBB, I like it so much....carry on.
reminding you by the next part of it....

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Post by Londonhbb Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:52 am

Looking to read the 2nd part big bro . Nice starting !
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Post by Biba Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:58 pm

After you left me ............ 330741 I didn't know that we have such a good poet in here.
Nice job Big Brother . I expect more from you .
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Post by tones of love Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:40 pm

After you left me ............ 11127 oh brother so romantic but please don't stay a looong Age writing the 2nd part ok cos I'm waiting ok After you left me ............ 330741
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