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The Moon.....( poem )

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The Moon.....( poem )

Post by Thewolf on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:01 pm

The Moon
Look at the moon tonight
Shine in the sky as a knight
All the eyes at it stare
Like a bride on her chair
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Wating for the light
Of her groom and his bright
Why are you so far, moon
We need to touch you soon
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I do believe, house of angels you are
I will defy, and find your way
Maybe my love waiting me there
Never, i waste a second to find her
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I will fight, kill and die, i won't care
I will do this, i do swear
From above send us
Your light and bless
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Give me the power for life
Light my way and turn to happiness this grief
Make the hope stick to me
Oh! Moon, without you, what are we
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In the wild desert you are
My companion with a star
When the creatures are asleep
You stay with me in the dark night
Wrote by: Moon lovers
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Post by chinda on Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:17 am

Good job Wolf...really a nice poem, since it is about the moon, sure it is a nice poem...
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Post by bilinda on Wed Jul 07, 2010 2:03 am

great keep on writing each time we discover something new in you
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Post by talei_93 on Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:28 pm

this is a beautiful poem.
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Post by Thewolf on Sat Jul 10, 2010 3:48 pm

Thank you a lot Chinda, do not forget that you helped me so much by your advise and cause of your support i started love trying writing.
Bilinda, thank you very much. And you are welcome talei_93
read you soooooon
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Post by Guest on Sat Jul 10, 2010 5:35 pm

Very nice wolf..........and you say you aren't remantic?!! I think the contrast....waiting mor from you.

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Post by Thewolf on Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:53 pm

You are welcome Angeleyes, yes i'm very romantic ( shshshsh )
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Post by cookie on Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:06 pm

wow wolf i didn't know that u r a poet

nice words i like the moon too
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Post by princess on Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:49 pm

How can a native of the land declare that the moon is so far
How can you brother say so and blind the eyes of the blue world to the reality of my red earth
An earth telling the misteries of the dark places of my soul
An earth that touched many times the deepest me
I did love it
An earth opening itself to a sky, day and night
A sky I would not call beautiful, since "beautiful" is an over-used word...the poor word is tired but i'll tell you about its story in another humble set of lines
A sky which simply 'skyful' expression millions of 'skies'
One of them makes you touch the moon.....
to be continued maybe

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Post by louli on Thu Aug 05, 2010 3:16 am

Thats what i didnt expect from you Wolf!!... really a touchable poem!! keep writing mate! you're doing such a great job!

very interesting reply from Princess as well!!
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Post by Thewolf on Thu Aug 05, 2010 1:29 pm

Princess comment made the moon visit me himself at the previous night, it is really a big honor.
Thank you Louli, but i want say that the poem wrote by: moon lover ( s ) it mean some one was an important partner. We built this poem 4lines by four lines, i wish i can say the name of my partner
By the way, who loves the Earth?
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Post by imy on Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:13 pm

i congratulate you Thewolf, very interesting and romantic, pliz carry on writing!!!

princess princess princess; your words are like a sweet symphony that is still echoing in my ears. you have moved me.

reading you soon mates.
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Post by MaGGiE on Thu Aug 05, 2010 8:02 pm

waaaaaaaaaw! how it is beautiful ur poem! ,i advise u to keep writing , because ur place is

not here ,ur place is in "Competition for the best poet in the world" hhhhhhhhh.............thank you very very much......read u soon.
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Post by Thewolf on Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:07 pm

Thank you very much Imy
Maggie, i'm not in that level but thank you very much too
your words were nice
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Post by mimi cici on Fri Apr 08, 2011 11:28 pm

a very nice poem,what's this wolf...hhh
I wonder who makes u change like this?.u became Romantic..great Laughing
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Post by Thewolf on Thu Apr 14, 2011 9:23 pm

Mimi cici ...Romanticism is not a sweater we wear it and each one walk by us can see it...it is something inside us...only who loves us, feel it...and only whom we love, swim in it.
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Post by mimi cici on Fri Apr 15, 2011 12:17 am

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
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Post by cookie on Sun Apr 17, 2011 7:00 pm

the other partner i guess hhhhhhhhhhh
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